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Teenagers usually going to the places where they think they will have good fun. They also choose seaside, lakeside or some camps in the mountains. Lazy young people willingly lay on the sunny beach and drink some ice drinks. They rarely play beach volleyball and swim. Someone who are more active and brave choose for example climbing on the mountains or parachuting. Others teenagers choose popular water sports like: canoeing, sailing or diving. Scouts go (tu nie wiem?) to scout's camps. They stay in a tent or huts, make a bonfire and sing a song. They often go for a walk and run in a forest. This kind of spent free time is something like survival school. All young people on holiday like go to the discos and dance to the morning song .The vacations is the time to relax and rests, for this reason all teenagers love it.

Teenagers usually LIKE going to 'the' (niepotrz) places where they think they will have good fun. They also choose THE seaside, lakeside or some camps in the
mountains. Lazy young people willingly lay on 'the' A sunny beach and drink some iceD drinks.
Someone who 'are' (tutaj IS dlatego, ze someone to odnosi sie do l. poj) more active and brave chooseS for example climbing 'on the' (niepotr) mountains or parachuting. 'Others' OTHER teenagers choose popular water sports like: canoeing, sailing or diving. Scouts go to scout camps. They stay in a tent or huts, make a bonfire and sing 'a song' (moze lepiej ..sing songs - bo wiecej jak jeden). They often go for a walk and FOR A run in a forest. This kind of
'spent'(niepotr) free time is something like A survival school. All young people on holiday like TO go to the discos and dance 'to the morning song' (czy masz na mysli...until the morning?). 'The' (niepotr) Vacations 'is' ARE-dlatego ze vacations to l.mn) the time to relax and 'rests' REST AND for this reason all teenagers love 'it' (tutaj THEM - dlatego, ze vacations to l.mn).

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