Pocztówka (60 słów)

Mam do napisania pocztówkę w języku angielskim (60 słów). Pocztówka ma być zrobiona na jutro, a ja mam dziś zajęcia do wieczora i niemożliwym jest abym się wyrobił z napisaniem jej dlatego gorąco proszę Was o pomoc. Jeżeli ktoś pomoże będę mega wdzięczny ;] A o to co ma się w pocztówce znaleźć:

- write something about the family you are staying with
- tell your friend about the school you are attending
- tell your friend what you do after classes
- write something about the teachers and other students
- ask something about your friend
- write about a new thing that you have learnt

Za pomoc będę dozgonnie wdzięczny ;)

Hmmm, to juz jakby Twoj problem, kolego. Trzeba umiec organizowac sobie czas.

Jesli napiszesz sam i wkleisz tu, ktos moze pomoc Ci to poprawic.

"Hmmm, to juz jakby Twoj problem, kolego. Trzeba umiec organizowac
sobie czas."

Ech, jakby to było takie proste z tym czasem to dobrze by było....

Dear Martin,
I've just got your letter and I was happy to hear everything is OK in England.
I changed my school because I moved to another city - now I live in Wrocław. My parents still hasn't come here so now I'm living with my grandparents and it's really cool - my grandmother cooks everything that I want and my grandpa helps me with my homeworks - he is great at math! My new school isn't that bad - after month here I know all people from my class and I can say they're all really nice. We often meet after school to play football or go to the cinema - I really like them. But on the other hand school isn't just a classmates - we also have much to learn so I don't have very much time to relax nowadays. Most of teachers are friendly and polite, but there is also my chemistry teacher - I hate him! He is rude and sometimes I think he doesn't know anything about the subject that he's teaching! Luckily I have chemistry only once a week. The good information is that I have many lessons of information technology so I can spend more time in front of PC. On last lesson we learnt how to use Microsoft Excel - believe me it's really useful. But enough talking about me. How is it going in England? What does your brother do nowadays? Is Frank finally getting on with his girlfriend?
Good luck at your school and I'm looking forward to get answer from you soon!

Best wishes,
Mark

Proszę o poprawienie błędów i jeśli to możliwe to o skrócenie do takiego stanu, żeby było nieco więcej niż 60 słów, a treści zawarte w moim pierwszym poście aby w liście zostały.

Dear Martin,
I've just got your letter and I was happy to hear everything is OK in England.
I changed my school because I moved to another city - now I live in Wrocław. My parents still hasn't {HAVEN'T -l.mn.} come here so now I'm living with my grandparents and it's really cool - my grandmother cooks everything that I want and my grandpa helps me with my homeworks {HOMEWORK - niepoliczalny} - he is great at math! My new school isn't that bad - after {A} month here I know all {THE} people from my class and I can say they're all really nice. We often meet after school to play football or go to the cinema - I really like them. But on the other hand school isn't just {bez:a} classmates - we also have much to learn{,} so I don't have very much time to relax nowadays. Most of {OUR/ THE}teachers are friendly and polite, but there is also my chemistry teacher - I hate him! He is rude and sometimes I think he doesn't know anything about the subject that he's teaching! Luckily{,} I have chemistry only once a week. The good information{NEWS} is that I have many lessons of {lepiej:ON} information technology so I can spend more time in front of {THE} PC. On {DURING THE} last lesson we learnt how to use Microsoft Excel - believe me it's really useful. But enough talking about me. How is it going in England? What does your brother do nowadays? Is Frank finally getting on with his girlfriend?
Good luck at your school and I'm looking forward to getTING AN answer from you soon!

Best wishes,
Mark



A teraz wersja "okrojona". Nie wiem ile tu jest slow, ale mozesz pobawic sie tym dalej i wkleic skrot ponizszego:

Dear Martin,
THANKS FOR THE LETTER, I was happy to hear YOU'RE OK.
I changed my school because I moved to Wrocław. I'm living with my grandparents and it's really cool - my grandmother cooks {WHAT} I want and my grandpa helps me with {HOMEWORK - niepoliczalny}. My new school isn't that bad - after {A} month here I know all {MY CLASSMATES} - nice people. We often meet after school to play football or go to the cinema. But we also have much to learn{,} so I don't have much time to relax. Most teachers are friendly, but there is also my chemistry teacher, WHO'S QUITE rude. The good information{NEWS} is - I have many lessons of {lepiej:ON} information technology so I can spend more time in front of {THE} PC. Last TIME we learnt ABOUT Microsoft Excel -it's really useful. But enough about me. How is England? What does your brother do{IS your brother DOING} nowadays?
Good luck at school and I HOPE YOU WRITE SOON!

Best wishes,
Mark

Serdeczne dzięki Oli2 ;)