Proszę o sprawdzenie.

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Proszę o sprawdzenie zależy mi na czasie :) z góry dziękuje :)

It was a morning day. The sun was shining and all children were very happy because it was a last day before a holiday. Mr. Smith and his wife Jenny have been living in Buffalo for over 3 years. Buffalo was a small city where everybody know each other very well. Every year this day children from school prepare a special show which talking about Buffalo’s legend. According to urban legend the main important symbol of the city was and still is rabbit. The show was prepared by Jenny Mr. Smith’s wife. She was a teacher and she helped children to prepare their costumes. Her son, Mathew had to play a leading role in the show. He had to be a rabbit. Jenny and Mathew were in a hurry because alarm clock didn’t go off and they were late. Mrs. Smith was very angry. She claimed that his husband had forgotten to repair alarm clock and now she didn’t have enough time even to eat a breakfast. She reminded his son to took his costume. Mathew took the bag and go out with his mum. This day Mr Smith didn’t feel enough good so he decided to stay at home. After few minutes his wife called to him and nervously said that Mathew had forgotten to take his costume. They didn’t have to much time. Mrs Smith decided to go shorter way by river. She borrowed a boat and when he was in a middle way it started to rain. The horrible wind blend and he felt horrifying. He felt cold and he decided to wear a costume which was prepared for his son. Although he known that he looked very strange he thought that it was the only solution in this situation. The weather got worse and worse. Jeny started to nervous because her husband didn’t come. The show was canceled because the weather damaged a stage. Jeny told the police that her husband was on a boat in the river and asked them to helped him because he probably couldn’t manage with boat in a such horrible weather. The special helicopter started to seek a man on a boat but they only find a rabbit and they decide to give them a carrot. When the man was lowered from helicopter he noticed that it wasn’t a rabbit but Mrs Smith who was changed into costume.
Prosze przepracuj i to solidnie 'the' i 'a' - to jest bardzo wazne. Jak tego nie bedziesz mogl teraz zrozumiec, to bedziesz mial problemy na zawsze.

It was a 'morning day' (niestety to pojecie nie istnieje w jez. ang - albo jest morning albo jest day, mozna 'ear;y morning' albo late morning'). The sun was shining and all THE children were very happy because it was 'a' THE last day before a holiday.
Buffalo was a small city where everybody knEW each other very well. Every year ON this day children from THE school prepareD a special show which 'talking' (zle slowo) about Buffalo's legend. According to urban legend the main important symbol of the city was and still is A rabbit.
She was a teacher and she helped THE children to prepare their costumes.
Jenny and Mathew were in a hurry because THE alarm clock didn't go off and they were late.
She claimed that 'his' (his to znaczy 'jego'- popraw) husband had forgotten to repair THE alarm clock and now she didn't have enough time even to eat a breakfast. She reminded 'his' (jego?-czy jej?) son to 'took' TAKE his costume. ON this day Mr Smith didn't feel 'enough good' WELL ENOUGH so he decided
to stay at home. After A few minutes his wife called 'to' (niepotr) him and
nervously said that Mathew had forgotten to take his costume. They
didn't have toO much time. Mrs Smith decided to go A shorter way by THE
river. 'She borrowed a boat and when 'he'' (cos tu nie tak-she borrowed, ale he was?) (ale kto? cos tu nie tak - jak mowisz o boat to 'IT') was in a middle 'way' (nie (OF...the river), it started
to rain. 'The' A horrible wind 'blend' (tego nie rozumiem) and he felt horrifIED.
Although he knEW that he looked very strange he thought that it was
the only solution in this situation.
JenNy started to FEEL nervous because her husband 'didn't' HAD NOT come. The show was canceled because the weather damaged 'a' THE stage. JeNny told the police that her husband was on a boat in the river and asked them to helP
him because he probably couldn't manage with A boat in a such horrible
weather. The special helicopter started to seek a man on a boat but
they only 'find' FOUND a rabbit and they decideD to give 'them' (ale ile tych rabbits tam bylo?) a carrot. When the man was lowered from THE helicopter he noticed that it wasn't a rabbit but Mrs Smith who was changed into A costume.
chcialbym umiec ang jak terri [marzyciel] ;)
a ja chcialabym miec tyle lat co ty - chetnie sie zamienie.
[az] 18 ;]
pisałam to szybko i sama teraz widze jakie nie potrzebne błędy porobiłam, dziękuje bardzo za poświęcenie czasu i sprawdzenie tego, w niektorych miejscach nie rozumiałaś bo pomyliłam she z he i wyszło takie poplątanie :) ale już sama to sobie pozmieniam i jeszcze raz bardzo dziękuje :)
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