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Obiesty is a illness of our civilisation. More and more people have overweight cause they don't take any kind of sports and they eat too many sweets and fatty things. We don't have time for nothing beside earn money so we eat in fast food restaurants which are harmful for our health and weight of course. One of main rason of this situation is fact that we frequently have a snack between meal. I think schools should educate teenagers about terribly effects of this style of life. Maybe in the future this problem disappear, but I don'y belive it.
'Obiesty' (ortog) is a illness of our civilisation. More and more people 'have' ARE overweight 'cause' (tutaj BECAUSE) they don't take any kind of sports and they eat too many sweets and fatty things. (to nie jest zawsze prawda!)
We don't have time for nothing ELSE beside earnING money, so 'we' (we - czy masz na mysli 'nas'- Ciebie i mnie - ja nigdy nie jem w fast-foodach!) eat in fast food restaurants which are harmful for our health and weight of course. One of main 'rason' (ortog i tutaj l. mnoga) of this situation is THE fact that we frequently have a snack between mealS. I think schools should educate teenagers about THE terribly effects of this 'style of life' (mozna tez lifestyle).
Maybe in the future this problem WILL disappear, but I 'don'y' (ortog) 'belive' (ortog) it WILL.