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Proszę aby ktoś sprawdził moją historyjkę.

1. Last Friday, about 7 o'clock PM three robbers went into a jeweller's.

2. They approached to counter and then the tallest robber took out a gun and said to shopkeeper: "Close your mouth and open the till!".

3. The scared man said: "Please, don't shoot me!".

4. The second robber was stealing jewellery while the last burglar was standing outside and looking round.

5. He should advise his partners if anybody wants to get into that shop.

6. The man was looking round very attentive but unfortunately (or luckily!) there was somebody unnoticed.

7. It was a junior clerk. He slipped from the backup and then he called the police.

8. The police came very quickly so robbers weren't out of the running for escape.

9. The officers surrounded a jeweller's and clumsy robbers
surrended very fast.

10. Two weeks later until the trial burglars plead guilty.

11. After that the judge sent the men to prison.

12 They will spending there long time.

2. They approached THE counter and then the tallest robber took out a gun and said to THE shopkeeper: "Close your mouth and open the till!".


4. The second robber STOLE jewellery while the last burglar was standing outside and looking round.

5. He WAS TO TELL his ACCOMPLICES if anybody wantED to get into that shop.
SHOULD tylko w cz. teraźn.

6. The man was looking round very attentiveLY but unfortunately (or luckily!) there was somebody unnoticed.

7. It was a junior clerk. He slipped OUT from the back ROOM (wymknął się z zaplecza?) and then he called the police.

8. The police came very quickly so robbers weren't out NIE ROZUMIEM of the running for escape.

9. The officers surrounded THE (chyba tego samego, co został napadnięty, tak?) jeweller's and THE (ci sami, o których pisałeś) clumsy robbers
surrendERed very fast.

10. Two weeks later DURING the trial THE ROBBERS pleadED guilty.
burglar - włamywacz (raczej nocą, pod nieobecność właścicieli itp.)

12 They are going to spend a long time there.

dzięki.