formal e-mail - prosze o sprawdzenie

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Bardzo prosze o sprawdzneie krótkiego formal e-mail:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a sixteen-year-old student from Poland. I saw yours notice and I am writing to enquire about studying English at the First Class School of English. I hope you can answer some questions.
Firstly, could you tell me if there are still places in the Pre-Intermediate gruop?
Secondly, I wonder how much the course costs?
The next, I would like to know how many students there are in the group? Because I prefer to learn in small group.
And the last, can you tell me if the school can help me with accommodation? Because I am from other country.

I look forward to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
xyz

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