prosze o sprawdzenie

One day met Bonnie with Clyde. She was a waitress and when heard his offer instant on it concede.
They are going to steal bank. The next day they met. When they are walking, see beautiful car, and stole it.
One week leter armed on bank. They stole a little money. They need more money so three weeks leter armed another bank. Six month leter when went a car became to identify for police. They were not stop themselves and police began to shot for theirs.
Thereby shooting died Bonnie and Clyde so their beautiful car stayed destroyed.

Bardzo proszę, niech ktoś poświęci chwilę

spróbuję coś Ci poprawić...od razu zastrzegam, że nie wiem, czy dobrze :-))

One day Bonnie met Clyde. She was a waitress and when she heard his offer she agreed on it instantly/immediately/at once.
They planned to rob a bank. The next day they met. When they were walking next to the car park (na przykład), they saw a new and beautiful car and decided to steal it.
One week later they robbed a bank, but stole to little money..they need more, so three weeks later they robbed another bank.
After six months, the police identified their stolen car and tried to persuade them to stop, but their didn't want to surrender and police officers began to shoot at them.
Shooting killed Bonnie and Clyde; also their beautiful car was destroyed.

a i jak miał byś kiedyś jakieś problemy, z chęcią Ci pomogę :-)

at once..
They met the next day...
When they were walking near the car park..
beautiful new car....
the police indetified the car they were driving..