Nie rozumiem co masz na mysli 'angielskie liceum'? Czy masz na mysli 'A' levels?
Po drugie - jak ja juz pokaze, wskaze ze gdzies zrobiles blad, to prosze jego poprawic zanim drugi raz wklejasz wersje. Nie mam czasu na poprawiania tego samego 10 razy, bo bledy ktore ja wskazuje Ciebie nie obchodza.
I am applying for this scholarship because I have always set myself high aims . I have participated in school life, took part in Olympiads and sport competitions .
....ja bym to napisala inaczej. My application for scholarship is being supported by the fact that I have always took an active participatory role in school activities by taking part in Olympiads and sport competitions. (Tylko ja nie jestem pewna czy ktos w UK bedzie swiadomy co to jest Olympiada)
'It' (nie moze byc 'it' bo tutaj mowisz o 2ch roznych rzeczach - Olympiady to jedna, sports competitions to drugie) gave me a lot of experience 'that I use in my life' (napisz dokladnie w jaki sposob - co one faktycznie daly)
My first success was in a history competition (tutaj dodalabym rok, albo klase-tylko ze w ang. piszemy 1st year, 2nd year) (daj tutaj...where I received the title of laureate - napisz dokladnie co to znaczy) which taught me that through hard work and study, I 'was' (tutaj zmienilabym na 'AM') able to achieve success. 'which was receiving the title of laureate' (w zlym miejscu w zdaniu)
'This title gave me' b(daj to inaczej...This gave me) the maximum number of points in recruitment to 'lycee' (napisz dokladnie co to jest - szkola dla dzieci w wieku....)
..... In life it is very important to know how to deal with difficult situations' (napisalam Ci wyzej, ze wg mnie to jest niepotr. a ty dalej swoje). Niema wiec sensu w tym zebym dalej sprawdzala.,
... give me an opportunity which is a study in Great Britain, where education is on one of the highest levels in the world .
......tutaj tez swrocilam Ci uwage...no ale ty dalej wkladasz swoje. Oczywiscie jak wiesz lepiej jak ja, to moja pomoc niema zadnego sensu.