being rich and famous

1. Write an article about good and bad points of being rich and famous. Write your article for the newspaper.

It is likely that most people want to be rich and famous. If you are rich you don’t need to worry about mundane things of everyday life, such as money for living or basic needs. You can abandon yourself to a life of pleasure and enjoy your wealth. However, you might be accused of being superficial by many if you do so. A lot of people in your country and all over the world do not even have a way to earn a living.

If you are famous, you can afford anything your imagination can conceive and meet your desires. You can do most expensive sports and eat best food and be treated as royalty.

On the other hand, many of the rich do not know how to spend their money reasonably and they end up as a drug addict or alcoholic. Money makes the world go round, yet mostly life is never as one expects it to be.

Fame and richness – does it have any bad points? If you find fame desirable, you may be happy. If you want people to cheer when they see you, you may be happy as well. But is it the way a man is designed for? Buying expensive limos and eating best food – is it the way a man is meant to be? The certain thing is that everything is dust. But what is left behind you and never passes are… your good deeds.


dzięki

mozesz zaczac od: in all probability
jak zaczynasz zdanie od if, to w srodku musi byc przecinek
mundane things of everyday life to chyba powtorzenie tresci
przymiotniki w stopniu najwyzszym uzyte przed rzeczownikami wymagaja the, w koncu nie mowi sie besciak, tylko debesciak
like royalty, nie 'as', bo nie jestes royalty
many rich people
druga addicts, alcoholics - trudno zeby kilka osob skonczylo jako jedna osoba, ok?
mostly chyba w innym miejscu
fame and richness - zrob z tego normalne pytanie
one thing that is certain is that...
deeds to nie podmiot, wobec czego 'is', nie 'are', ok?

Dzięki MG, ale jeśli jeszcze pozwolisz...


Dlaczego?
'Mundane' - znaczy przyziemny, więc zdanie: If you are rich, you don’t need to worry about mundane things of everyday life - jeśli jesteś bogaty, nie musisz się martwić o przyziemne rzeczy codziennego życia.

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czemu nie może być:

'many of the rich do not know how to spend their money'

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Kurcze, to nie wiem, gdzie ma być 'mostly' - zdanie poniżej...

'Money makes the world go round, yet mostly life is never as one expects it to be.'
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np. tak:

Does fame and richness have any bad points?

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'But what is left behind you and never passes are… your good deeds.'
Ale co jest nie tak w tym zdaniu?

tłum: Ale co jest pozostawione za tobą i nigdy nie przemija są... twoje dobre czyny

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