Express Yourself!!!

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Whenever i want to live,
I scream
when The Life is walking away from me

I`m sticking to It
and I`m tellin` : \"Life\"
Don` walk away yet
His warm hand in my hand
my lips by his ear
I whisper...
Life
- as if It was a lover
who wants to leave me

I hang myself on his neck
I cryyyy:
\"I`m gonna die if U walk away...!\"

Ps.why feel so sonfused today...
BIT
Your poem is very moving.I can\'t write poems.When I want to express something extraordinary I paint and then destroy my work.It\'s too personal to be shown ....and not of very good quality:)
Rescue... the strongest

I am standing at the summit of a mountain

Surrounded by some fog

Of people’s sufferings

The nearest executioner makes me drowsy.




I am seeing those worlds

Where human like a bird

Is touching its wings, its vices

The fate of inhabitance.




Cry, I am hearing those whispers, painful weeping

Clashing into tears’ drops encirclement

And I am screaming into my silence: ‘ Rescue... the strongest ‘

But no one except for angels is able to hear.
Normal, I `m wondering if U have a romantic soul...I usually write poems while I `m angry or very verrryy sad...I don`t know why.I can`t create nth sensible when I`m very happy..but than I sing and dance.According to my poems..I show them very rare and esp to ppl who are very close to me.So I`m not surprised that U don`t wanna expose Ur feelings on such an usual way.
I`m very expressive person and ppl tell me that i even don`t know when I have attacks of frustration or irritation or etc...
BTW , thanks for comments
BIT
My soul is rather pragmatic I\'m afraid.:)..but this bit you\'ve written about hapiness is very true:I\'ve heard a theory saying that if all the geniuses were happy there wouldn\'t be any geniuses no the earth!
Well, well,well..Cornflake_Alice .I`m impressed;>
There can be noticed a touch of sorrow, eh ?
You must have been sorrow-stricken while writing such words.I got it,it makes sense, as though sometimes I wanted to know what incident and thoughts preceded Ur outburst.
Write more here, more poems, more thoughts...i can`t wait to contemplate them.
GREETs form BIT
Normal, guinesses are not happy, not all of them ?Nice shot, but let one unheed...ha , ha! Such ppl rally fellows and with their hands they would crush U.(joking...;P)
I lastly found myself irresolute , I don`t mean that I`m lack of boldness but i`ve noticed that I dash things off without a motivation , inspiration.I feel the absence of the reason or just incentive for doing sth.
Normal r U normal for real ?;P I guess I ask as I feel like being in the state of frenzy.How come...I donn` know,maybe 19 year old girls sometimes have to go down...to then raise their spirit and express themselves or just to stir unrest.
Hiyah Laura,

As for the poem I wrote it in 1997 as if I knew what would happen in the next couple of years incl the sept 11th tragedy that was a real shock to many of us all over the world. Interestingly, I felt a sort of unbearable sorrow similar to the one expressed in Rescue..The Strongest, though it was rather similar to hopelesness eg. u cannot have much of any influence on things that happen around u if we are talking about violence and loss of a person as one of its misfortunate consequences in particular. I did lose somebody precious and this poem is largerly devoted to her as my tribute- the words I wasn\'t able to utter face to face... Ps. I do have a few more things to share, give it time ;) and thank u for ur kind words. If only I had more time to write..heh...Cornflake_Alice
I`ve already read the quotation:\"a poem is never finished, only abandoned\'\'..ooohh...geeeeeee....it`s like writing Master Degree by my brother.Paul Valery, the author of these cool words was right against the odds:>>>
Dear Cornflake_Alice,
U raise my hopes and U raise sensitivity.I think all of us remember the day of that tragedy...As I considered there is a truth that during hard accidents which we have to face up(or eventually not) the most beautiful ,spiritual ,from the bottom of our hearts expressions are written down.Along the lines _Alice,the person who had a high-profile in Ur life, heart....knows and appreciates how precious she was for Ya,just without word-to-mouth.
I`m glad that U show me the letter-poem,I hope that U r really as great personality as the human being coming out of the sense of Ur words.
oh, now.I feel blessed.No anger.Alice is a very influential person. she may perhaps have the feeling of social thinking.
and I shout : \"Life..don`t walk awayyy..
.....I`ll die If U do so.\"
I believe I can fly said the man with his closed eyes when the sun flooded his rough and sensitive face with shiny rays of warm nature. It was like a dream, immortal, pious, pure to sit naturally and enjoy the while that was passing its minutes and hours. Tic tac, beat after beat in his kind chest made by gods and wives of princes standing upright in each and every book collected in the world wide libraries, in different cultures and cities to visit. He was lonely, didn’t want to roll a tear, what for? he was asking himself, to remember, to forget, to forgive the way he had left behind, was there anything to add?

A woman, carried by flowers enchanting its scents, was walking down the street. Apparently, she was smiling inside, almost going to explode, she uttered to herself: I am being loved for the way I am, lead me then somewhere further in order to melt the horizon, my curing hands are touching your chest, my lips are kissing your hair, I am all yours. Eternal closiness as the sun goes up, it is still not the noon...and they awaited in embracement the spark to be born, it came suddenly with its hands closing their eyes, opening their mouths full of honey sticky mixture burning the smooth skin of her; stomach, round arms waving irresistably as one kiss after another made her madly jealous it wasn’t her lips. He was breathing her perfumes, the token of womanhood, the mist, she was mysterious, unique at the moment he saw her face; now kissing her back like a china in his hands, a gentle man, going down deep her to reach out the surface in the corridor of inner beauty mixed with sensitivity, violence, disaster, joy she was engaged to while telling a joke, while making love, while pretending to be observer, was she eventually? What for? she was asking herself, to survive, to create, to witness exclusive moments of united forces of spontainous love, moaning with excitement as his face turned into her own. Basically, the lonely walls were falling down ascribed to them both since some time...

The immediate playground was living its own life, vital, cheerful, donated by children’s laughing, running to and fro like aeroplanes crushing its spread wings into silence of another ordinary day. Being an innocent kid while getting old, being an eldery lady while ten months’ old, the twins raised they hands up covered with some golden sand, they sat and stared at legs going to disappear around the corner, black high heels at first, then sandals presenting its charm in a sporty way, shaggy knees, uneven toes which pointed four directions, North, South, East, West piece of people’s soul. I believe I can fly said the boy and picked up his toy...

\'I Believe I can Fly\' is another short story of mine I wrote approximately in 2001/2002. Somehow, it may be a sort of referrence to a person I used to be friends with for 2 years unfortunately life circumstances set up apart. A reminiscence is partly alive by now. And I do think there is a kid\'s soul in all of us. Laura, thanks for ur kind words about me, not sure I deserve them..Whatever moves me I tend to jot it down although it is a drop in the ocean of thoughts... Do u have anything else to share up in this poetic corner? ;) Cheers Cornflake_Alice
I\'m normal for real and sometimes a state of unrest or even frenzy is quite real,normal and appriopriate:)Are you really 19 or is it only a figure of speech?
Hey..Normal:p U shouldn`t have asked me about my age:PPPI`m a woman (whatever it means),but I let it slip,ooops..Anyways.Why ask ?Are U much older or is it just a male curiosity, eh ?
U claim that U r totally normal person..hm...is it a profound truth or maybe U have sth what drags ppl to U- we usu.have but most of ua donno `bout it.Ease my mind and tell me sth...Perhaps there`s sth funny or strange in U, remember that those ppl r much more interasting.OK,, so there`s a ray of hope for me .afterall:)
Now I am a Calm Spirit who feels alone...and U, Cornflake_Alice, U r a dreamer ,you are the faerie of the moon light 4 me
BUT
when will i find the one,
the one for me,
some one to appreciate me,
to treat me right,
some one who will be there for me,
some one who doesn\'t think negative
things about me,
some one who won`t use me,
some one who will be truthful and faithful to me,
who won`t cheat or lie to me,
who won`t mock me,
some one who will be nice and sweet to me,
some one who won`t neglect me,
i want a guy like that,
where could he be,
i have yet to find any one like that,
is he hidding on me,
or maybe its not my turn yet,
maybe the dice has yet to roll,
maybe im not ready,
maybe i still have time to go......
Calm down, it`s not a poem...this is me for today.I feel content with U, even if I donno if could trust U or not...but U probably loose Urself in writing and I so do but..in reading it.
I feel lovely,i BELIEVE i CAN FLY. That winged me I guess
sometimes Ifeel like i\'m not acting right around ppl
like I should act differently then I do
I feel bad sometimes for the way I act..If that make sense...?
if God didn\'t exist...then nothing would make sensebut what if things don\'t make sense right now...
ok, bye
Hey Laura, time you cheered up. Even though ur life sucks right now, I bet there must be something that keeps you going eg friends or woman\'s drive I suppose you have. So keep ur head up and hold on for life is too short to remain upset. Yeah, easy to say one might say, but hey..Don\'t expect love to enter ur life and it will if the absence of the other half makes u sad& impatient...Wonders do happen, at times it is just the waiting that teaches us to take failures with grace and a sign of a humble soul...I am half a dreamer, more importantly I am a puroposeful lady..If there is something I cannot achieve today, I will the next and so on and so forth...Be positive and the world will shine at you !!!! Ps. Didn\'t log in for I had barely had time to...Cheers
Sorry for asking about your age, but I must admit that I was provoked into doing it by yourself;)And there\'s a definite ray of hope for you!
Hi Laura,

Your writings are very deep and I was wondering why you feel awkward and so self conscious around others.
I think you should maybe think about things you eat. Do certain foods make you pass gas? If that\'s the case, you might find it difficult to find yourself around others and vice versa. It\'s not being rude or personal but it just might be as simple as that...

Have you heard this one before:

\"Beans, beans, the magical fruit
the more you eat - the more you toot
the more you eat - the better you feel
eat beans for every meal! \"

Well then, Laura, if that\'s NOT your problem then you are just like anyone of us and no different than anyone of us so relax and take life easy. It\'s only in your mind!
custard-bastard:P
U destroyed my good mood....huuhh..life.I don`t need ur help to realize such primitive sorts of things....geeee....why U write in such a stupid way...I wrote what i felt,but U couldn`t cheer me up pointing out thgs like that!
Very funny talk on beans, verrry...
well, welcome in our pannel and enjoy Urself(...)
Thank U and U and U and U....Cornflake_Alice;>
I m not that bad...;)I`m just short of money.Maaad short.
But I`m still a lucky little girl;]
There a just a few who are deserving of knowing what goes on in my life...but still me:
Sometimes I unwind
Look back to the passing of time
Sometimes I feel
Those days become unreal
Our lives are fashioned by things that come from outside
Control so indirect we don\'t even realize
Someday my instincts will be things I can trust
Someday too much conditioning could make me self destruct
Someday I\'ll fall back on values I\'ve created in time
Someday I\'ll have the chance to take back what\'s mine
Sometimes I say
It\'s just gonna be that way
Sometimes I hear
My own words come out unclear




and on and on....
Im 19,Can\'t exactly seem to pinpoint the origin of the feelings.
but I have a feeling.
It`s something.
\"Our lives are fashioned by things that come from outside\"

...not only \"outside\". Inside as well and I tried to point that out to you but instead I got insulted. Don\'t call me a bastard as it will only make your life more miserable.
First of all, Lady, I do have a gas problem myself and sharing with you was NOT a good idea. Whether you consider it primitive or not, it\'s one of many biological functions by which your body and everyone elses needs to work in order to survive. To make matters worse many times I had to go through an unspeakable humiliation because of my condition and how would YOU feel if you had the same problem? I began to feel for you and you gave me a cold shoulder. No compassion, no understanding. Don\'t expect too much from others then.
But pls don`t solve SUCH problems here. better write a poem.I am sorry that U have a gas problemm but it should be teated.Good Luck!
Thank you.
I did write a poem but it wasn\'t mine, however it came straight from the heart (ehm...yes, yes, the heart!). My physical well being is just as important to me as my spiritual one and the lack of one can affect the other one in a very profound way.

But here is my poem to better express myself. I hope it will be appreciated:

IT\'s not easy, it\'s acute
Case of stinky solute.
It\'s not flute or bombs in Beirut
It\'s MY case I have to embrace.
How do you act, what do you say?
When others stare in dismay?
You feel like crying when you \"misbehave\"
Others take offense while my LIFE has lost its sense.
They say \"Pig Manners, use two-ply!\"
Where did I go awry?
I can\'t help what others can
I\'m NOT a pig, I am a gentleman!
What do you do and what do you say
When doc can\'t help me in any way?
I need acceptance, I need friends
I will take any that God sends.
It\'s not a showcase
I want no fear
I need some space
I am not a queer!

Can YOU forgive me?
Can you love me too?
When my behind\'s gone askew?


yours always,

The Gentleman


How do you like that Laura?
What kind of feeling do you have?Because if it is hatred....I feel pity.
heeyooo Mr.Gentleman:>

U have realllly surprised me!Do U realy identify with these words?If it is from the bottom of Ur hearrt..well, I`m glad that U decided to write it.Now U introduced Urself from the different side.
>the lack of one can affect
>the other one in a very profound way.--ohh yes.U said sth good and have U ever wanted to share Ur big luck with s`else?It`s wonderful!
Ok, I`m waitin 4 next great opening of Ya.


>yours always,
>
>The Gentleman..............are u Mine or it`s just a polite end of Ur poem,hm?

BITTT
sorry for lack and luck.. cos I`ve read it and I`ve borne in mind the heared sonund of the word thus I made a mistake in response
Why hatred? hm. sometimes I`m sad but I don`t turn my anger towards the others.Don`t feel pity I may hate the murderer eventually, heh but not U ...( U r Normal...heh..words.........) ;P
But when Life hurts , the pain stucks me to the core,I try to understand , I try to cope with , but it`s soooo hard..
And i don\'t feel like a Wonder Woman anymore.
ok, i may not like but not hate indeed
Its like OMG, LOL, kewl :-) :-) I is special cos I rite like this for you peeps 2 get what I, OMG, rite and all is gr8 :-) :-) ;-) OMG, LOL...LOL, ROFTL...

l8er

I is mucho ar7is7......peace.......kewl......yeah...LOL, LOL..
OMG...I forgot some I didn\'t use \"U\" instead of \"you\" and \"UR\" instead of \"you are\" or \'your\" (?!?)...

oh...and WTF?!?

now is kool or kewl and kosher....
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