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Napisz opowiadanieo przestępstwie, którego sprawca został złapany na gorącym uczynku, zatytułowane "Crime does not pay".
It is a story of young man Erick who was growing up in pathological family. His father was an alcoholic and mother did not take care of him. When he was fifteen he started to steal things, smoke cigarettes and drink alcohol. One day at school teacher noticed he is totally drank and he was expelled from school. After it he got into bad surroundings and received a gangster's name Stealer. In short time he got a great respect among criminals and he was sure he is untouchable. So he did whatever he wanted starting from robberies and heavy crimes such as rapes. Erick was happy than he have never been before. He had everything what the life did not give him. He was glad to hear that people were afraid of him. He bacame an important person but what is sad in criminal community. After a couple of months he had on his account a lot of crimes. The police knew about his carieer although they were forceless becasuse there were no evidences. During his another action he was so confident but he was not careful. His friend betrayed him to avoid punishment. The police caught him red-handed when he was trying to steal a cash from bank. After long and exhausted trial he confessed and he was found guilty of all crimes. The judge sentenced him on twenty years and he spent the best moments of his life imprisoned at jail. The proverb which says: "Crime does not pay" turned out to be a real according to this sad story.

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