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Alternative medicine seems to be gaining more popularity nowadays. What are possible benefits and danger of such treatments and would you recommend it? Why? Why not?

Alternative medicine is example of teratment based on unusual methods such as using herbals instead of ordinary medicines which consist complicated and unhealthy substances. Nowadays it is becoming widespread all over the world. What are possible benefits and dangers of such treatments?
First of all, such treatment may save a lot of human beings. According to medical experts in some cases these methods destroy at all or just stopped disease's development. Furthermore, the alternative medicine is less harmful for organism than other ways of cure which have got a lot of side-effects. Besides, such products are made of natural sources which do not have an impact on polluting environment unlike to medicines prepared in companies which create a lot of dangerous substances producing it such as carbon dioxade.
On the other hand, people do not have a sure whether the treatment will help or not. Sometimes it happens that it does not bring expected results. What is more, alternative medicines may be expensive not only because products are less harmful but also they require a lot of work to create them. Lastly, such treatment is aganist church's principle which says: 'You will not have other Gods'. and the clerical community condemn those who us it.
All in all, I personally think that every way is good to save a life because it is the most precious thing what we have. I would recommend such treatment for all people because it always worths to try even if it is forbidden by religion.
Alternative medicine is AN example of 'teratment' (ortog) based on unusual methods such as using 'herbals' (tutaj herbal medicine) instead of ordinary medicines which consist OF complicated and unhealthy substances.
According to medical experts in some cases these methods destroy 'at' (nie rozumiem tego slowa tutaj) all or just 'stopped' STOP THE 'disease's development' (napisz to ...development of the disease). Furthermore, the
alternative medicine is less harmful for AN organism than ANY other ways of
cure which have got a lot of side-effects. Besides, such products are
made of natural sources which do not have an impact on polluting THE
environment unlike 'to' THE medicines WHICH ARE prepared in companies which create a lot of dangerous substances producing it 'such as' (moze inaczej..for example those which produce) carbon 'dioxade' DIOXIDE.
On the other hand, people 'do not have a sure' ARE NOT SURE whether the treatment will help or not. Sometimes it happens that it does not bring THE expected results. What is more, THE alternative medicines may be expensive not only because products are less harmful, but also BECAUSE they require a lot of work to create them. Lastly, such treatment is 'aganist' (ortog) THE church's principle which says: 'You will not have other Gods'. and the clerical community
condemn those who us it.
All in all, I personally think that every way is good to save a life
because it is the most precious thing 'what' THAT we have. I would recommend
such treatment for all people because it IS always 'worths' WORTH 'to try' TRYING even if it is forbidden by religion.

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