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'Environmental pollution can lead to total disaster'. What problems are hinted in this headline and how can we prevent this disaster?
The problem of environmental pollution is well known all over the world.In XXI century it bacame really serious and widespread bacause people realized that all Earth's sources will finished some day and they are guilty for this proccess. The hole in ozone layer is bigger, temperature is warmer, the sea level is higher and others negtive phenomena in nature. What are causes of such disaster? How can prevent it?
Firstly, there are plenty of reasons why the environmental pollution exists. The main and essential is a human's existence. We can divide an environmenatl pollution on pollution of air, Earth and sea. The first one is caused for instance by using areosols which consist harmful and dangerous substances, driving cars, smoking cigarettes; Another one by deforestation, no receycling, throwing away rubish, using fertilizers and others. The last one is existed because people use ships to export goods and other people to different places and some of ships may be damaged by weather conditions and then an oil leaks are created which not only pollute sea water but also kill animals. There are only some of examples of destroying the environment by human beings.
To protect and also prevent it from disaster we should recycle, use bicycle instead of cars, do not use areolsols and other substances which have got bad impact on natural habitat. We ought to remeber about both animals and plants because they are a part of our world and without our life is impossible. What is more, it is a good idea to create more organistations such as greenpeace which supports a fight with pollution and tries to protect our environment.
On balance, it is only depend on people if we will live with agreement of nature or we will destroy it what may have bring us many negative aspects.

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In XXI century it 'bacame' (ortog) really serious and widespread bacause
people realized that all THE Earth's REsources will 'finished' (tutaj czas teraz) some day and they are guilty 'for' (dlaczego 'for'-dla a nie cos innego) this proccess. The hole in THE ozone layer is bigger,(bigger than what? moze lepiej..is getting bigger) temperature is warmer, the sea level is higher and 'others' (nie, tutaj OTHER) ''negtive' (ortog) phenomena in nature' (cos tu nie tak). What are THE causes of such disaster? How can (ale kto?) prevent
it?
Firstly, there are plenty of reasons why 'the' (niepotr) environmental pollution
exists. The main and essential (ale co? essential co?) is 'a human's' (tutaj piszesz o l. poj - ale nas jest wiecej na swiecie) existence. We can divide
'an' THE 'environmenatl' (ortog) pollution 'on' (znowu ta kalka z polskiego 'na' - tutaj INTO pollution of air, earth and sea. The first one is caused for instance by using areosols which consist OF harmful and dangerous substances, driving cars, smoking cigarettes. 'Another' THE OTHER one by deforestation, no 'receycling' (ortog), throwing away 'rubish' (ortog),
using fertilizers and 'others' (nie, nie pisz 'others, napisz and OTHER harmful substances). The last one 'is existed' (nie, tutaj EXISTS because people
use ships to export goods and other people to different places and
some of THE ships may be damaged by weather conditions and then 'an' (niepotr)oil leaks are created which not only pollute sea water but also kill
animals. 'There' THESE are only some of THE examples of destroying the environment by human beings.
To protect and also prevent 'it' (a tutaj 'it' do czego sie odnosi) from disaster we should recycle, use bicycleS instead of cars, do not use 'areolsols' (ortog) and other substances which have 'got' (niepotr) A bad impact on THE natural habitat. We ought to remeber about both animals and plants because they are a part of our world and without THEM our life is impossible. What is more, it is a good idea to create more 'organistations' (ortog) such as Greenpeace which supports a fight with pollution and tries to protect our environment.
On balance, it 'is' (po co to 'is' tutaj?) only dependS on people, if we will live 'with' IN agreement 'of' WITH nature or we will destroy it 'what' (kalka z polskiego 'co' tutaj WHICH may 'have' (niepotr) bring us many negative aspects.
Popracuj nad 'the', 'a', i 'an'.

dziekuje. Wiem ale za bardzo nie wiem jak mam sobie poradzic z tymi przedimkami,niby znam kiedy stosowac a jak przychodzi co do czego to lipa;/

Prosze uprzejmie o sprawdzenie błedow. Jest mi to potrzebne na dzis wieczor...pisze to takiemu gimnazjaliscie. Ma sie tego nauczyc na pamiec.


in my opinion, on of the most interesting place is Szydłowiec. It is the 600 year old town with the population of 1500 people. Its in Poland, near Radom.There is so much to see in Szydłowiec. It is famous, because it has the monuments and historic buildings, that turists from all over the world can admire. We can visit the beautifull Saint Sigsmunt Church, which wos built with local sandstone, the amizing castle, the jewish cemetery. In the centre of typical medieval town square, there is a late Reinaissance Town Hall. In front of the Town Halls facade, there is a towns historical pillory.Szydłowiecs pillory is the unique monument of the kind in Poland.
It is the charming town, and great for walking around in. People living there, are friendly and honest.There are a lot of restaurant, where people can eat delicious food. I think, that Szydłowiec is the vwry interesting place. It is the perfect place if you want to have good time.