taka ogolna uwaga: czas przeszy od be to was dla lp (byl/a) a were dla liczby mnogie
Five hundred years ago in a castle in the middle of a forest [moze uzyje kontrukcji there is/are w odpowiednim czasie ]were [przedimek]Queen .Her name was Elisabeth. She was very rich. She had everything [she wanted lepiej]what she want. Her husband King Julian V were [zla forma czas.] very bad. People in her country called him “soulless King” because he told people to work hard. he didn’t like kids especially infants. Elisabeth were [czasownik nie w tej formie] [rzedimek] very friendly and sociable person. She loved kids. There were rumors that she had a little daughter in the past, but no one knew what was [bez was, bo wtedy wychodzi strona bierna] happened to her. Elisabeth felt lonely all the time. She was depressed after that [bez that] she lost her child. Nobody in the Kingdom knows [czas przeszly] her story and nobody understood her. A long time ago she lived in the other kingdom called “Tuscany”. In Tuscany she had [przedimek] husband and three kids. Her husband were [forma czas. zla] farrier [nie rozumiem tego slowa] and she raised a children [tu jest cos nie tak] at home. Everybody in the Kingdom were [zla forma czas] happy and led a joyful life. But [in a few winter - tego nie rozumiem] there was a war with a neighboring kingdom. More than half of the [bez przedimka]Tuscany was destroyed. Her husband and kids were killed by the enemy. She was taken prisoner and had to marry the [bez przedimka]King Julian V. She hate [zla forma czasownika i zly czas]him but she had to hide it all the time. Once she decided to reveal the whole truth about her past. When the king heard this he understood that all live [live to jest czasownik a Ty chyba chcesz rzeczownik tu. i dodaj przed nim jeszcze his] he was [had been] very selfish and cruel and he must [had to]fix it. Since then life in the kingdom were [has been] batter [spelling], There were no more wars and everyone lived [long and happy lepiej happily ever after] .[/quote]