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Childhood is a part of life connected with our best memories. Although children later adults who grew up without sibling have rather different memories and sometimes characters than people with siblings. Nowadays more and more people decided to have only one child because firstly they want to find a well-paid job.

There can certainly be some real advantages of being a one child. At first one child has usually more toys, clothes and the other things. Parents buy him a lot things. They spend more money for their child and it can have whatever it wants. As well as that parents devote more attention and spend more time with it. This child musnt`t share a room with anybody.

ON the other hand upbringing of only child has some dark sides. For example they hasn`t anyone to play with them and they are usually bored with playing alone. On the top of that they sometimes can`t share with the other people because they have everything for themselves.

So all in all being an one child in family is probably a good thing, also has bad sides. Their parents should try to raise them well.

Although children (tu brakuje slowa np AND) later adults who grew up without (przedimek) sibling have rather different memories and sometimes characters than people with siblings. Nowadays more and more people 'decided' (teraz. - decide) to have only one child because firstly they want to find a well-paid job. (a co to ma wspolnego z jednym dzieckiem - napisz)

There can certainly be some real advantages of being aN 'one' ONLY child. At first one child has usually more toys, clothes 'and the other things' (np jakie - musisz napisac - nie uwazaj ze czytajacy ma sie domyslac) . Parents buy him a lot (brakuje slowa) things. They spend more money 'for' (zle slowo, tutaj ON) their child and 'it' (chociaz nie lubie jak mowimy o ludziach jako 'it') whatever it wants.
This child 'musnt`t' (napisaklas calkowicie cos innego co mialas na mysli - tutaj chcialas napisac DOES NOT HAVE TO) share a room with anybody.

ON the other hand upbringing of (tu brakuje slowa) only child has some 'dark sides' (napisz disadvantages). For example they 'hasn`t' HAVEN'T anyone to play with them and they are usually bored with playing alone. On 'the' (niepotr) top of that they sometimes can`t (tutaj brakuje cos - moze learn to)share with 'the' (niepotr) other people because they have everything for themselves.

So all in all being an onLY child in (przedimek) family is probably a good thing, BUT IT also has bad sides.