Prosze o sprawdzenie błedów-opowiadanie

This tale is based on [przedimek] true story.
Jim was a quiet, shy man in his mid thirties.Though he was hansome and inteligent, he still lived with his mother in [brakuje slowa] home town.One [brakuje slowa] when he couldn't stand [to jest nie tak]his mother's averprotectivness, he decided on the move. [moze: to move out]Three days later, Jim was on the [his] way to Los Angeles, where he bouhgt [przedimek] small bedsitter in [przedimek] tower block. He found [przedimek] well[kreseczka]paid job, which was his dream come true. [nie wiem jak poprawic, ale jest nie tak]
One beautiful day, when he was waiting for the lift, a pretty girl-Annie stand [czas]next to him and say [czas]..Hello!".He falled [łoo, irregular vbs do powtorki] in love at first sight [raczej: it was love at first sight], but he was too much [wyciac] shy to answer. For the next 2 months they passed each other in [inna preposition] the stairs. In the end Jim daved [??]and invited she [nie ten przypadek] out for dinner.He groomed himself carefully and he was very agifated.In the restaurant he ate with trembling hands.He wanted to come out[?] well in her eyes. And they started to talk, tension was easing. He forgot about the [his?] shyness. Suddenly he remembered that he had forgotten [brakuje slowa] take a [lepiej his]wallet. He was paralysed by the dread [nie], all the more so because the moment of pay the bill was approaching.Suddenly he remembered one scene from the [inny article] fiilm and found the [wrong aritcle] piece of the foil in his pocket. And when Annie was going to the toilet, he throws [czas] this to his soup and beckons [czas]to the waiter.Of course he hadn't to [czas przeszly od have to tworzy sie inaczej] pay and he saved his dignity.

He found [przedimek] well[kreseczka]paid job, which was his dream come true. [nie wiem jak poprawic, ale jest nie tak]