Thomas Edison

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The American inventor and scientist Thomas Edison ( 1847-1931) is one of the greatest inventors in the history. He invented a lot of very important inventions, which we use today including the Dictaphone or the electric chair or He also developed many devices like the phonograph, the motion picture camera, and a long-lasting, practical electric light bulb. His earliest inventions were related to telegraphy, including a stock ticker because when he was young he has been working as a telegraph operator His first patent was for the electric vote recorder. One of his greatest achievement is a improvement the light bulb in 1879. Consequently the light bulbs began be used in industry. In 1886 Edison established the Edison Electric Light Company. Today it's known as the General Electric and it's the one of the biggest companies on the world. Thanks to his inventions we can use a lot of different technologies.

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The American inventor and scientist Thomas Edison ( 1847-1931) is one of the greatest inventors in 'the' (nie rozumiem dlaczego masz to slowo tutaj.) history. He invented 'a lot of' (uzyj lepsze/wyzsze slowa) very important inventions, which we use today including the Dictaphone 'or' AND the electric chair 'or' (tego nie rozumiem) He also developed many devices 'like' SUCH AS the phonograph, the motion picture camera, and a long-lasting, practical electric light bulb. His earliest inventions were related to telegraphy, including a stock ticker because when he was young he 'has been working' WORKED as a telegraph operator
One of his greatest achievementS is 'a' (zly przedimek) improvement (tutaj cos brak) the light bulb in 1879. Consequently, 'the' (niepotr) light bulbs began (brak slowa) be used in industry.
Today it's known as 'the' (niepotr) General Electric and it's 'the' (po co to slowo tutaj jest?) one of the biggest companies 'on' (dlaczego robisz kalki z jez. polskiego - na polski odpowiednik slowa 'na' tutaj piszemy IN) the world. Thanks to his inventions we can use 'a lot of' (poszukaj lepsze slowa) different technologies.