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My ideal room from my dreams is huge room only for myself. Here nobody can't tell me what I must or have to do and I don't have to clean my big room, beacuse I've got a cleaner. Celing is 4 metres high! My walls are blue and on them are posters with players of my favourite teams Football and Volleyball. There is much of posters with bands, too. Opposite the biggest wall is window. I see here all my neighbourhood. My bed is in shape of Formula 1 car. Near bed is my desk. I do there my homework, surf in Internet (on my nootebook) and listen to music. I like big clothes (lubię duże ciuchy) so I must have big wardrobe for them. It is next to the window and near wardrobe I have got a big plazma TV on the wall. In the middle of my room, there is a billard table. Little further is table when I can eat. I can listen very loud music and nobody don't scream that I must turn it off. I very like my room, beacuse it's big and I can do whatever I like.

'My' THE ideal room of my dreams is....
'beacuse'...przepraszam, co to niby za slowo jest?
(a gdzie przedimek?) celing is 4 metres high! My walls are blue and there are posters with players of my favourite (tu daj to football - (i malymi literami) and volleyball teams 'Football and Volleyball' (niepotr).There are a lot of posters 'with' OF bands, too.
Opposite the 'biggest' (largest) wall is (a gdzie jest przedimek?) co to? dzisiaj nie jest dzien do ich uzywania czy cos?) window.
My bed is in (a gdzie przedimek?) shape of (brak przedimka) Formula 1 car.
'I do there my homework' (zla kol slow...There, I do...), surf in Internet (on my nootebook) and listen to the music.
Little further is (brak przedimka) table ...
'beacuse' (sprawdz to slowo w slowniki i pisz bezblednie.

Prosze nauczyc sie uzywac przedimkow, bez tego zdania sa niegram. Przedimki (a, an, the) to nie sa opcja - one sa po to zeby byc uzywane.