Poprawiłam według wskazówek, mam nadzieję, że jest choć ciut lepiej :). Prosiłabym o ponowne przejrzenie pracy.
Mg bardzo dziękuję za wytłumaczenie dlaczego mam źle ;). Mam nadzieję, że dobrze zastosowałam się do Twoich wskazań :)
The moon
was shining (shine) its light on the still waters of the lake as the animals
were hunting (hunt) for their dinner in the forest. In the tiny long cabin, Jack Cangney
was sitting (sit) in front of the fire, trying to warm his cold feet. It
was been snowing (snow) eanliner that day and Jack
had choped (chop) wood in preparation for the long winter ahead. Suddenely, he
heard (hear) a strange noise. He quickly
put on (put on) his boots,
grabed (grab) a torch and
went (go) outside. He
shone (shine) the torch into the darkness but
saw (see) nothing. A few seconds later, he
hear (hear) the noise again. With his heart thumping, he
climbed (climb) the ladd leading to the roof. When he
reached (reache) the top he
saw (see) two huge eyes staring at him. Realising what is
was (be), he
chuckled (chuckle) and
sighted (sigh) "Abigail! You nearly
scared (scare) me to death!". The owl which Jack
had been nursing (nurse) back to health after she
had broke (break) her leg,
hoot (hoot) and
was fluttered (flutter) her wings.
edytowany przez Purplle_: 05 kwi 2011