Sprawdzenie - historyjka z użyciem form przeszłych. (wpisać w luki)

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The moon was shining (shine) its light on the still waters of the lake as the animals were hunting (hunt) for their dinner in the forest. In the tiny long cabin, Jack Cangney was been sitting (sit) in front of the fire, trying to warm his cold feet. It was snowing (snow) eanliner that day and Jack had choped (chop) wood in preparation for the long winter ahead. Suddenely, he hear (hear) a strange noise. He quickly put on (put on) his boots, grabed (grab) a torch and went (go) outside. He had beed shining (shine) the torch into the darkness but had saw (see). A few seconds later, he hear (hear) the noise again. With his heart thumping, he was climbing (climb) the ladd leading to the roof. When he had reached the top he had been seeing (see) two huge eyes staring at him. Realising what is was (be), he was chuchled (chuchle) and was sighted (sigh) "Abigail! You nearly scared (scare) me to death!". The owl. which Jack nursed (nurse) back to health after she broken (break) her leg, hoot (hoot) and was fluttered (flutter) her wings.

was been sitting jest zupelnie niepoprawne. usun jedno slowo
snow - tam jest mowa, ze wczesniej padalo, a wiec jakis perfect
hear to tylko bezokolicznik
zdanie o swieceniu latarka dotyczy sytuacji pozniejszej niz poprzednie zdanie, a wiec 2xsimple past. Tam chyba brak ostatniego slowa - 'nothing'?
zdanie o wspinaniu sie na drabine tez popycha akcje do przodu - simple past
zobaczyl dwoje oczu - to tez nowe wydarzenie - simple past
chuckle, sigh - najpierw dowiedz sie, co to znaczy
w ostatnim zdaniu - ktore cza sowniki pokazuja, co sie stalo nastepnie - na pewno nie pierwsze dwa. Pierwsze dwa mowia, co bylo wczesniej i trzeba uzyc odpowiedniego wczesniejszego czasu.

Poprawiłam według wskazówek, mam nadzieję, że jest choć ciut lepiej :). Prosiłabym o ponowne przejrzenie pracy.
Mg bardzo dziękuję za wytłumaczenie dlaczego mam źle ;). Mam nadzieję, że dobrze zastosowałam się do Twoich wskazań :)

The moon was shining (shine) its light on the still waters of the lake as the animals were hunting (hunt) for their dinner in the forest. In the tiny long cabin, Jack Cangney was sitting (sit) in front of the fire, trying to warm his cold feet. It was been snowing (snow) eanliner that day and Jack had choped (chop) wood in preparation for the long winter ahead. Suddenely, he heard (hear) a strange noise. He quickly put on (put on) his boots, grabed (grab) a torch and went (go) outside. He shone (shine) the torch into the darkness but saw (see) nothing. A few seconds later, he hear (hear) the noise again. With his heart thumping, he climbed (climb) the ladd leading to the roof. When he reached (reache) the top he saw (see) two huge eyes staring at him. Realising what is was (be), he chuckled (chuckle) and sighted (sigh) "Abigail! You nearly scared (scare) me to death!". The owl which Jack had been nursing (nurse) back to health after she had broke (break) her leg, hoot (hoot) and was fluttered (flutter) her wings.

*It was been snowing - jest zle...it HAD been...
*had choped - jest zle - had choPPED
*grabed a torch - jest zle graBBED a torch
few seconds later, he HEARD the
after she had broke - jest zle...after she had BROKEN her leg, hooTTED and FLUTTERED her wings