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Bombay is the capital of the Indian state of Maharashtra, located on the island of Salsette, on the Arabian Sea. Within the town there are three lakes: Tulsi, Vihar and Powai. Indian name Mumbai is derived from the local Hindu goddess Mumba. In the sixteenth century the Portuguese called it Bom Bahia, which mean good bay. British colonization has changed its name to Bombay

Transport
Most of the residents of Mumbai, uses public transport system.
Bombay is an important hub for rail traffic. From the city railway lines radiate in all directions in India. The main railway station is the Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminus.
In Bombay there is also an international airport Chhatrapati Shivaji.
Thanks to the natural port of Bombay is one of the most important commercial ports in India.

Population
In Bombay, lived 17 million inhabitants and is the sixth the number of inhabitants metropolis in the world. For every 100 men, women account for only 81.1.
This mix of immigrants throughout South Asia. The result is that you hear on the streets of multilingual hubbub. Most of the population speaks Hindi or the local dialect of Hindi bambaiya. In addition, popular languages are Marathi and Indian Polski (Indian variety of English). Marathi is the official language of Maharashtra. Other languages are used in Bombay Gujarati, Bengali, Tamil. Culture.

Culture.
Residents of Mumbai is called a Mumbaikar or Bombayite.
The city held numerous celebrated festivals, festivals and holidays of different religions.
In Bombay you can eat well, listen to folk music, watch video and read the Hindu Hindu book.
The city is the birthplace of Indian cinema. The first film made here in 1896. For these reasons, the city owes its nickname of Bollywood.

In Bombay there are many historic buildings. The most popular are:
India Gate
Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminus
Reserve Bank of India
Bombay Stock Exchange
General Post Office
Haji Ali Dargah Mosque

Sport
Most popular sport in the city is cricket. Particularly popular are the Sunday trips to the cricket. The local team is one of the best teams in the world. In the city there are 2 stadiums to play international cricket: Wankhede and Brabourne.
THE Indian name Mumbai is derived from the local Hindu goddess Mumba. In the sixteenth century the Portuguese called it Bom Bahia, which 'mean' MEANT good bay.

Most of the residents of Mumbai, 'uses' (to ma sie zgadzac z 'residents') public transport system.
Thanks to BEING 'the' A natural port of Bombay is one of the most important commercial ports in India.

In Bombay, 'lived' (ale kiedy? jak teraz to czas terazn.) 17 million inhabitants and IT is the sixth 'the number of' (niepotr) 'inhabitants' (nie w tym miejscu) LARGEST metropolis in the world.
.....This mix of immigrants throughout South Asia......(to nie jest zdaniem)
he result is that you hear on the streets 'of' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa) multilingual hubbub. In addition, popular languages are Marathi and Indian 'Polski' ? (Indian variety of English). Marathi is the official language of Maharashtra. Other languages 'are used in Bombay' (zla kol slow..used in...) Gujarati, Bengali, Tamil.

Residents of Mumbai 'is' (to ma sie zgadzac z 'residents') called a Mumbaikar or Bombayite.
The city 'held' (kiedy, jak teraz to zly czas) numerous celebrated festivals, festivals and holidays of different religions.
In Bombay you can eat well, listen to folk music, watch video and read the Hindu 'Hindu' (niepotr) book.
The city is the birthplace of Indian cinema. The first film WAS made here in 1896. For these reasons, the 'city owes its nickname of Bollywood' (tu massz przekrecone...bo to Bollywood jest wdzieczny Bombay a nie odwrotnie).

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