Równowaga między życiem prywatnym a zawodowym.

Czy w dzisiejszych czasach możliwe jest zachowanie równowagi pomiędzy życiem prywatnym a zawodowym? Napisz rozprawkę w której wyrazisz swoją opinię na ten temat.

Nowadays many people have a problem with keeping balance between work and a personal life. Even in the 21th century, when technological progress help us save time, it is a reall challenge to keep our planing under control. I believe that it is possible but it require from us a good organisation, self-confidence and set targets.
To begin with, lets take as example people who are working in proffesion which they love.
Actors, fashion designers or priests are ussually working on the possition which make them reward/give them satisfaction(prawidłowo? Chyba coś nakręciłam, nie wiem czy to jest zrozumiałe)But honesty- every kind of work can be fulfilling. If so, work is as well a source of income as a source of satisfaction and lifestyle.If you make what you like,you do not have problem with a topic which is broched,because your job is your private life eiteher. Moreover, if your partner shares intresting with you it became even more simply.
However no everybody are able to get a tailor-made workplace. Even if, it is still possible to carry out both of your duties. You have to think through your targets and make decision – how much time would you like to spend on a way to achieve each goals.If you talk to your boss about your familly, he will not give you extra-curricular tasks.Keeping family photo on a desk can help you to cope with decision about overtime (czy to zdanie jest zrozumiałe?). Finally – self-confidence is require to get both of a job and a life satisfaction.
To sum up, in my opinion, all things consider that it is possible to cope with work duties and personal life. Every workplace give us possibility to be goal-oriented. We just need to keep our eyes on the target.


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Nowadays many people have a problem with keeping (brak przedimka) balance between work and a personal life. Even in the '21th' (21ST) century, when technological progress 'help' (to ma byc 3os.l.poj) us (brak slowa) save time, it is a 'reall' (ortog) challenge to keep our 'planing' (nie, tu masz zle slowo, bo to pochodzi od 'to plane' a nie od 'to plan' zobacz w slowniku)e under control. I believe that it is possible but it 'require' (ale przeciez 'it' to 3os.l.poj, dlaczego czasownik nie jest dostosowany) from us 'a' (niepotr) good organisation, self-confidence and set targets.
To begin with, lets take as (przedimek) example people who 'are working' (zly czas, tutaj 'work') in 'proffesion' (ortog) ale i tak powinno byc w l. mn) which they love.
Actors, fashion designers or priests are 'ussually' (ortog) working 'on' (kalka z polskiego tutaj IN) 'the' (niepotr) 'possition' (ortog ale i tak l. mn) which 'make them reward' (niepotr) give them JOB satisfaction. But 'honesty' (zla czesc zdania, tutaj HONESTLY)- every kind of work can be fulfilling. 'If so,' (nie rozumiem) work 'is' (niepotr) as well aS BEING A source of income IS 'as' (niepotr) a source of satisfaction and lifestyle. If you 'make' DO what you like,you do not have (przedimek) problem with a topic which is 'broched' (ortog ale i tak zle slowo),because your job 'is' (zos tu nie tak) your private life 'eiteher' (ortog). Moreover, if your partner shares 'intresting' (zla czesc mowy) with you it becOMES even more 'simply' (zla czesc mowy - mieszasz czesci mowy).
However noT everybody are able to get a tailor-made workplace. Even if(,) (przecinek nie jest potrzebny) it is still possible to carry out 'both of your duties' (tego nie rozumiem, napisz w calosci o oco chodzi). You have to think through your targets and make (przedimek) decision – how much time would you like to spend on 'a' (zly przedimek) way to achieve 'each goals' (tutaj pomieszalas, 'each GOAL). If you talk to your boss about your 'familly' (ortog), he will not give you 'extra-curricular' (generalnie, tak tylko mowimy o zajeciach poza-szkolnych) tasks. Keeping (przedimek) family photo on a desk can help you to cope with ANY decisionS about overtime . Finally – self-confidence is requireD to get both 'of' (niepotr) a job and a life satisfaction.
To sum up, in my opinion, all things 'consider' (zly czas) that it is possible to cope with work duties and (przedimek) personal life. Every workplace giveS us (przedimek) possibility to be goal-oriented.

Masz problemy z przedimkami - poszkol ich troche jeszcze.

Bardzo dziękuję, poprawiłam, mam nadzieje, że nie na gorszą wersje:
Nowadays many people have a problem with keeping a balance between work and a personal life. Even in the 21st century, when technological progress helps us to save time, it is a real challenge to keep our planning under control. I believe that it is possible but it requires from us good organisation, self-confidence and set targets.
To begin with, lets take as an example people who works in professions which they love.
Actors, fashion designers or priests are usually working in the positions which give them satisfaction. But honestly- every kind of work can be fulfilling. So that, work as well as being a source of income is a source of satisfaction and lifestyle.If you do what you like,you do not have a problem,because your job (powinno być „are”?) your private life either. Moreover, if your partner shares intrests with you it become even more simple.
However not everybody are able to get a tailor-made workplace. Even if it is still possible to carry your job and personal life. You have to think through your targets and make a decision – how much time would you like to spend on the way to achieve each goal.If you talk to your boss about your family, he will not give you additional tasks.Keeping a family photo on a desk can help you to cope with any decisions about overtime. Finally – self-confidence is required to get both: a job and a life satisfaction.
To sum up, in my opinion, all things considered that it is possible to cope with work duties and a personal life. Every workplace gives us possibility to be goal-oriented. We just need to keep our eyes on the target.

To begin with, 'lets' (slowo jest 'let's' - let us) take as an example people who 'works' WORK (dlatego ze people to l. mn) in professions which they love.
....be fulfilling, so that, work as well as being a source of income is a source of satisfaction and lifestyle.
If you do what you like,you do not have a problem,because OF your job OR your private life either. Moreover, if your partner shares 'intrests' (ortog) with you it become even more simple.
However not everybody 'are' IS able to get a tailor-made workplace, even if it is still possible to carry your job and personal life.
To sum up, in my opinion, all things considered 'that' (niepotr) it is possible to cope with work duties and a personal life. Every workplace gives us THE possibility to be goal-oriented.

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Co do zdania
"If you do what you like , you do not have a problem, because of your job or your private life either."
To chciałam napisać, że nie ma wtedy problemu bo wtedy praca jest zarazem życiem osobistym.

ale tego nie napisalas, a ja sprawdzilam to co bylo i znaczenie tego bylo calkowicie inne.
If you do what you like, you do not have a problem, because then your job becomes part of your private life.

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