prosze o pomoc w sprawdzeniu listu i zaproszenia ;)

1. zaproszenie

Hi!
I'm organizing a farewell party, because I'm leaving to London next month. It's going to take place in Black Swan Club, because I think that there is a very nice atmosphere. At 6 o'clock at my party is going to sing one of the best singer in the world, Lady Gaga. To get there, you must go straight next to shopping centre and turn left. I hope you are coming!


2. list nieformalny

Hi Matt!
I'm sorry I haven't wrotten for so long, but I was very busy. It was nice to get your letter. How are you. I hope OK. I'm writing to tell you my news.
Some time ago I've found an animal. It was a small dog. I was going to my friend and I saw something black by the river. I came closer and I realised that it was a dog. I've decided to take it to my house, because I love animals and it looked very poor. My parents were so happy because of that. They loved this dog. I had a problem with my new dog, because it looked like it was sick. I've taken it to the wet and now everything it's alright. I have to go for a walk with the dog daily, but I really like doing that.I spend a lot of time with that dog.
I must finish now. I'm waiting for your letter. Say hello to your parents.
Love,
XYZ

;)

tam ma być I haven't written for so long, literówka . ;)

i 'everything is alright.' ;)

bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie ;)

;)

może ktoś sprawdzić?

I'm organizing a farewell party, because I'm leaving 'to' (nie wiem czy to masz na mysli, tutaj wyglada ze jedziesz DO Londynu) London next month. It's going to take place in (przedimek) Black Swan Club, because I think that 'there is' IT HAS a very nice atmosphere. At 6 o'clock at my party (is going to sing one of the best singer in the world' (tutaj masz calkowicie pokrecone - zaczniej...one of the.......going to sing...), Lady Gaga. To get there, you must go straight next to (przedimek) shopping centre and turn left. I hope you 'are coming' CAN COME!

I'm sorry I haven't 'wrotten' (ortog) for so long, but I was very busy.
How are you.(to jest pytanie, a gdzie znak?)
Some time ago 'I've' (dlaczego masz tutaj zly czas, tutaj I) found an animal.
'I've' (tutaj tylko 'I') decided to take it to my house, because I love animals and it looked very 'poor' (poszukaj inne slowo). My parents were so happy 'because of that' (tutaj napisalas ze rodzice byli szczesliwi dlatego ze 'dog' byl 'poor' - cos tu nie tak).
'I've taken' I TOOK it to the 'wet' (ortog) and now everything 'it's' IS alright.

Prosze nie robic bledow ortog. - w tym nie ma zadnej przyjemnosci.

chodziło mi własnie o to że wyjeżdżam do londynu ;)
the Black Swan Club
Lady gaga, one of the best singer in the world, is going to sing at my party. może tak być?
zamiast 'poor' - tu nie wiem. badly?
My parents were so happy because they like dogs.

przepraszam za błędy ortograficzne, nie wiem, zawsze się pomylę jak piszę.

At 6 o'clock at my party Lady Gaga, one of the world's best singers is going to sing at my party.

wiec tak napisz, albo przykladowo, ze sie wyprowadzasz do... lub ...FOR London lub leaving /nazwa miasta z ktorego wyjezdzasz/