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Mobile phone – a curse or blessing?

One of the most useful invention in last years was the mobile phone. Many people state that owning phone is necessary part of their life. While minority claim that they need not to have this because of possessing their telephone at home yet. According to that, it is worth to concern which standpoint is right.

First of all, it is often said that someone, who keep phone with himself, may communicate with anyone for all the time. It will be very useful, especially in case of an accident. That is why people’s existing is more comfortable in the age of mobile phone.

What is more, not only possibility of calling but also other functions are available in modern phones. The most popular of them is surely sending short texting messages, which gives a chance to exchange thoughts and information without speaking. Also possibility of surfing over the internet on screen of mobile phone cause that people have faster access to anything kind of knowledge.

On the other hand, from a medical standpoint using mobile phone has bad influence for our health. For instance, invisible waves may cause illnesses of brain.

Another disadvantage of mobile phone is that people never do have calmness because in every moment somebody might call to them. Obviously, it is very uncomfortable and stressful situation.

To sum up, I have no clear opinion on this matter. Possessing mobile phone makes our life easier while it is clear to me that people should speak more with themselves in reality. That is the reason why I could not understand particularly young people spending their all spare time speaking by phone.

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For and against legalization drugs

One of the most controversial social problem is taking drugs. Many people are rather opposed while according to minority narcotics should be banned. That is the reason why states have different legal articles on this matter. Which regulations are right?

Firstly, it is often said that citizens should have a freedom to decide if they want to do anything or do not. Similarly is with drugs. This is to say people have a possibility of choice. It is clear that some of them enjoy risk and they surely will try. Others have different, calm character so they would not like to take drugs.

Besides, many substances for instance the alcohol, cigarettes or coffee may be worse for health but almost all are legalized wherever. What is more, from a medical standpoint smoking marijuana has positive influence for concentration and especially mood. However, it can be pointed out that traditional way of smoking might cause terrible diseases, in particular cancer.

On the other hand, probably the major disadvantage of drugs is an addiction. The trouble is that an organism is more and more weaker. Also mental problems are become on account of the psychological addiction. Eventually, people taking narcotics are dying slowly.

Another negative point about that is lack of anything pros for young people. The legalization may show them that taking drugs is a good idea for everybody. Can we really afford to do that?

All things considered, it is clear to me that an approval for all drugs is unadvisable. The way I see it is that “soft narcotics” particularly marijuana might be sold in chemist’s without any advertisements on packets. I maintain that it will be an appropriate solution.

Mobile phone – a curse or (a dlaczego niema tutaj przedimka?)blessing?

One of the most useful invention 'in' (zle slowo) (przedimek) last (dadaj 'few') years 'was' (zly czas) the mobile 'phone' (ja wole to slowo w calosci). Many people state that owning (a gdzie przedimek?) phone is (brak przedimka) necessary part of their life. While (brak przedimka) minority claim that they 'need not to have' (popraw, to niema sensu) this because of possessing 'their' (daj tu 'a') telephone at home. 'yet' (wg mnie slowo niepotr). 'According to that' (napisz inaczej...Accordingly,), it is worth 'to' (niepotr) 'concern' (zle slowo) which standpoint is 'right' (nie za bardzo lubie tego slowa 'right' tutaj, niema takiego czegos jak 'right' i 'wrong' standpoint-).

First of all, it is often said that someone, who 'keep' (someone - 3os.l.poj) (przedimek) phone 'with' (daj BY) himself, may communicate with anyone 'for' (niepotr) all the time.
That is why people’s 'existing' (zla czesc mowy, tutaj rzeczownik) is more comfortable in the age of (brak przedimka) mobile phone.

What is more, not only IS THERE (przedimek) possibility of calling (kogo? czego? musisz napisac) but also other functions are available in modern phones. The most popular of them is surely sending short texting messages, which 'gives' (messages-GIVE) a chance 'to' OF 'exchange' (EXCHANGING) thoughts and information without speaking. Also (przedimek) possibility of surfing over the internet on screen of mobile phone 'cause' (nie za bardzo lubie to slowo tutaj - poszukaj cos innego) that people have faster access to 'anything' (zle slowo) kind of knowledge.

On the other hand, from a medical standpoint using (przedimek) mobile phone has (przedimek) bad influence 'for' ON our health. For instance, invisible waves may cause 'illnesses of brain' (napisz inaczej...brain malfunction).

Another disadvantage of (brak przedimka) mobile phone is that people never 'do' (niepotr) have 'calmness' (poszukaj inne slowo) because 'in' AT every moment somebody might call 'to' (niepotr) them. Obviously, it is (przedimek) very uncomfortable and stressful situation.

Possessing (przedimek) mobile phone makes our life easier while it is clear to me that people should speak more 'with themselves' (nie, to jest jkalka, tutaj...with each other) in reality. That is the reason why I could not understand particularly young people spending 'their all' (zla kol slow) spare time 'speaking' TALKING ON 'by' (niepotr) (przedimek) phone.

-Masz problemy z przedimkami, niestety musisz sie ich nauczyc...bo bedzie kleska do konca zycia z nimi.

For and against (przedimek) legalization OF drugs

One of the most controversial social 'problem' (l. mnoga, bo mowisz 'jeden z problemow) is taking drugs. Many people are rather opposed (do czewgo?) while according to (przedimek) minority ALL narcotics should be banned. That is the reason why 'states' (nie, tutaj 'countries') have different legal articles on this matter. 'Which regulations are right?' (zrob to zdanie inaczej...)

Firstly, it is often said that (przedimek) citizens should have 'a' (zly przedimek, daj ten dobry) freedom to decide if they want to do anything or 'do' (niepotr) not. IT IS 'Similarly' (zmien troche) 'is' (niepotr) with drugs. 'This' THAT is to say people have a possibility of choice. It is clear that some of them enjoy (przedimek) risk and they surely will try (ale co? napisz) .

Besides, many substances for instance 'the' (niepotr) alcohol, cigarettes or coffee may be worse for (przedimek) health but almost all are legalized 'wherever' (kalka z polskiego-ale i tak zle slowo). What is more, from a medical standpoint smoking marijuana has (przedimek) positive influence 'for' ON concentration and especially (ale czyj? palacego czy drugich?) mood. However, it can be pointed out that (przedimek) traditional way of smoking might cause terrible diseases, in particular cancer.

The trouble is that an organism is more and more weaker (ale kiedy? napisz) . Also mental problems 'are become' (nie, to jest zle, napisz ARISE) on account of the psychological addiction. Eventually, people taking narcotics 'are dying' (zly czas) slowly.

Another negative point about that is (przedimek) lack of anything 'pros' (tego nie rozumiem) for young people.

All things considered, it is clear to me that an approval 'for' OF all drugs is unadvisable.

Masz problemy z tymi przedimkami, popracuj nad tym.