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A holiday raport. Zgodnie z poniższymi pytaniami:
-Where did you go ?
- When did you go ?
- Who did you go with ?
- How did you get there ?
- How long did you stay ?
- Where did you stay ?
- What did you do ?
- Did you buy anything ?
- Did you have a good time ?
- Did you have any problems ?

I went to Zakopane last July with my Friend. We get there my car. We stayed for a 3 day in my uncle's cottage nearby Zakopane. First day We walked on mountain We achieved the higgest top in Tatras moutain . We climbed on Rysy. In the evening We played card games and chess. The next day We walked on Krupówki street where We bought some sovenirs for our families. The weather was wonderfull. Then We ate dinner in restaurant. We ordered tomato soup and big steak of mutton with potatoes and vegetables. In the evening we went on Gienek Loska Band concert. Third day We toured to Slovakia. We visited Water Park and then/exactly I learnt swimming.When we come back to house we get a flat tyre but I change wheel. It was fantastic time and I would come back there again.

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I went to Zakopane last July with my 'Friend' (nie musi byc duza litera) . We 'get' (tu ma byc czas przeszly bo to juz minelo) there (tu brak slowa) my car. We stayed for 'a' (niepotr) 3 'day' (ale przeciez 3 to wiecej jak jeden, dlaczego nie dales 'day' w l. mn) in my uncle's cottage 'nearby' NEAR Zakopane. (tu brak 2 slowa) first day we walked on (brak cos) mountain. We 'achieved' (lepsze slowo 'reached') the 'higgest' (ortog) top in (brak cos) Tatras 'moutain' (tutaj l. mnoga, bo jest ich wiecej jak jedna) . We climbed on 'Rysy' (musisz napisac co to jest). In the evening 'We' (dlaczego dajesz 'we' duzymi literami?) played card games and chess. The next day 'We ' (popraw) walked 'on' DOWN 'Krupówki' (czy to jest nazwa ulicy, czy nie Krupowka?) street where 'We' (chol jasna co sie dzieje - popraw) bought some sovenirs for our families. The weather was 'wonderfull' (ortog). Then 'We' (popraw) ate dinner in (brak cos) restaurant. We ordered tomato soup and (brak cos) big 'steak of mutton' (inaczej mutton steak) with potatoes and vegetables. In the evening we went 'on' (to jest kolokw- napisz poprawnie) Gienek Loska Band concert. (tu brak 2 slowa) third day 'We' (popraw) 'toured to' (to jest zle-popraw) Slovakia. We visited (brak cos) Water Park and 'then/exactly' (tego nie rozumiem) I learnt 'swimming' TO SWIM.When we 'come' (zly czas) back to (brak cos) house we 'get' (zly czas) a flat tyre but I 'change' (zly czas) (brak cos) wheel. It was (brak cos) fantastic time and I would 'come' GO back there again.

I went to Zakopane last July with my Friends . We got there by my car. We stayed for 3 days in my uncle's cottage near Zakopane. The first day we walked on the mountain. We reached the highest top in a Tatras moutains - we climbed on Rysy. In the evening we played card games and chess. The next day we walked on'Krupówki' ( tj. nazwa ulicy) street where we bought some souvenirs for our families. The weather was wonderful. Then we ate dinner in the restaurant. We ordered tomato soup and a big mutton steak with potatoes and vegetables. In the evening we went to Gienek Loska Band concert.The third day we went to Slovakia. We visited a Water Park and 'then/exactly' (chodzi mi o to, że wtedy nauczyłem się pływać) I learnt to swim.When we have coming back to house we got a flat tyre but I changed a wheel. It was a fantastic time and I would go back there again.

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