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My favorite place is London. London is the capital of England.
London is situated on the Thames. London is also the third largest city in Europe.

Although it is still raining in England, London attracts many tourists wanting to discover its charms. The main tourist attractions are;
Tower of London, Big Ben, Tower Bridge, Westminster Abbey, Buckingham Palace and London Eye.

I was in England many times and each time I admire her more and more.
I especially like the Buckingham Palace. Buckingham Palace is the official residence of British monarchs and the largest royal palace in the world. Palace was built in 1703 as the residence of the Duke of Buckingham town. a wonderful example of Gothic Revival architecture is Big Ben. Big Ben clock tower is the most recognizable in the world.

I think everyone would like for once in my life to see the whole of London. London is a magical place.



będę z góry wdzięczna, jeżeli ktos mi pomoże :). wypracowanie mam na jutro :/
jest krótkie . błagam pomóżcie !!!
edytowany przez olgaa272: 09 lut 2012
London is also the third largest city in Europe (tutaj wypada dac nazwy tych innych).
Although it is 'still' (zle slowo) raining in England, London attracts many tourists wanting to discover its charms.
I was in England many times and each time I admire 'her' (a dlaczego nie jego? w ang. to jest IT) more and more.
I especially like 'the' (niepotr) Buckingham Palace. Buckingham Palace is the official residence of (cos brak) British monarchs and the largest royal palace in the world. (cos brak) Palace was built in 1703 as the residence of the Duke of Buckingham 'town' (tego nie rozumiem) . A wonderful example of Gothic Revival architecture is Big Ben. (cos brak) Big Ben clock tower is the most recognizable in the world.

I think everyone would like for once in 'my' (to jest zle slowo) life to see the whole of London.

(A man who is tired of London, is tired of life)
dziękuję :)
My favorite place is London. London is the capital of England.
London is situated on the Thames and is also the third largest city in Europe after Moscow and Istabul.

Although it is all the time raining in England, London attracts many tourists wanting to discover its charms. The main tourist attractions are;
Tower of London, Big Ben, Tower Bridge, Westminster Abbey, Buckingham Palace and London Eye.

I was in England many times and each time I admire it more and more.
I especially like Buckingham Palace. Buckingham Palace is the official residence of British monarchs and the largest royal palace in the world. The official London residence of Queen. Palace was built in 1703 as the residence of the Duke of Buckingham. A wonderful example of Gothic Revival architecture is Big Ben. It is regarded as a symbol of England. Big Ben clock tower is the most recognizable in the world.

I think everyone would like for once in your life to see whole of London. London is a magical place.
A man who is tired of London, is tired of life...

poprawione :)
edytowany przez olgaa272: 09 lut 2012
Although it 'is all the time raining' RAINS ALL THE TIME in England, London attracts many tourists
The official London residence of Queen. ...To nie jest zdaniem...
THE Palace was built in 1703 as the residence of the Duke of Buckingham.