homeschooling

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Nowadays a lot of parents decided to learn their children in their houses. In the past only wealthy families could afford for that luxuries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of taking such a step ?
First of all, children whose are home-educated have enough time for learning. If they understand some problem they don’t lose their times for that but if they find something what is difficult for them can spend as much time as they need to understand. Furthermore they don’t have stressful situation like: tests, exam or answer on teacher's question. Home-educated children spend a lot of time with their parents. Parents have chance to know well their children.
On the other side, if children have as much time as their want they can have a problem at work because they work to slow. Moreover parents of teenagers can have difficulties in teaching, because there is more material and the learning starts to be more demanding. Besides children who are educate in home, don't spend much time with children in the same age. They don’t have friends. In the future they can have a problem with work as a group.

In conclusion, idea of homeschooling depends on a child's character. If they are clearly determined and do not have problems with team work, they can be teaching at home, if not – they should be educated at school. It is a very hard decision for parents too, but they should know about the possibilities for their children.

"Nowadays a lot of parents decided to learn their children in their houses" - ....decide to teach....at home.
"In the past only wealthy families could afford for that luxuries" - bez 'for' i that luxury (l.p)
"What are the advantages and disadvantages of taking such a step ?" a po co 'a'
"First of all, children whose are..." - 'who'
nast. zdanie niezrozumiałe
"answer on teacher's question" - answer to ... question,
"if children have as much time as their want they can have a problem at work because they work to slow" - "as they want", "can have problems at work", "they will be working too slow",
"children who are educate in home" - ecucated at home
"with work as a group" - with teamwork
"idea of homeschooling depends on a child's character" tu sens jest zły, wybór tej metody zależy od charakteru dziecka nie idea,
"If they are clearly determined and do not have problems with team work, they can be teaching at home" - znowu problem z sensem, czy te co uczą się w domu mają być bardziej zdeterminowane? i nie "teaching" tylko forma bierna,
"It is a very hard decision for parents too" dlaczego "too" ?

Jestem bardzo wdzięczna za pomoc :*