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Rozprawka: School don’t prepare young people for real life in the real world. – ‘For and against’ Essay.

It is said that man learns throughout his life. Despite that deep thought, it is certain that we spend 1/3 of our life on education. After harsh years at school, at the age of 25 (more or less) fresh graduated man has to face the real life and then he can find out if the school can prepare young people to live in the real world without demanding but in the end friendly and very helpful teachers.

Without a shadow of doubt, the main aim of school is to learn how to work in group, cooperate. It is one of the most important skill which everyone should be able to point out in his curriculum vitae. The greatest number of future jobs will demand this ability and that is why teachers put emphasis on group working. This kind of exercise can help find your place in group. Not everyone can be a leader as not everyone should be a quiet servant.

What is more, along with next classes young people can learn about the responsibility and independence – especially at boarding schools and at the university (if young man is living at the campus). They have to live away from home where parents can’t control them. It is the best way to feel what is it like to live on your own.

On the other hand life in school still seems to be far easier than the life which waits for young man after graduation day. For children in elementary school, for teenagers at college or students at university it could be the worst nightmare but as soon as they get their first job (if they will ever get one!), they will realise that all the school years were like never ending kinder garden where most of the kids were as smart as them, teachers were helpful and they didn’t have to worry about money.

On the whole, school help young people to find their place in society but there isn’t a book which could truly prepare them to face the real life.


byłabym bardzo wdzięczna za sprawdzenie :)

School 'don’t' (co to za dziwactwo, to tak jakby ktos mnie ciupaga rabnal) prepare young people for real life in the real world. – ‘For and against’ Essay

It is said that (a gdzie przedimek?) man learns throughout his life. Despite that deep thought, it is certain that we spend 1/3 of our life 'on' (tutaj jest ciekawie, ale napewno nie 'on') education. After harsh years at school, at the age of 25 (more or less) 'fresh' (zla czesc mowy) graduated man has to face 'the' (niepotr) real life and then he can find out if the school 'can prepare' (tutaj musi byc w czasie przeszlym) young people to live in the real world without demanding but in the end friendly and very helpful teachers. (nie za bardzo lubie to zdanie, ale)

Without a shadow of doubt, the main aim of school is to 'learn' WHAT- nie rozumiesz roznicy pomiedzy 'learn' a 'teach' - dlatego nazywamy nauczycielami 'teachers' bo oni 'teach' us) how to work in (brak przedimka) group, cooperate. It is one of the most important 'skill' (l. mn) which everyone should be able to point out in his curriculum vitae.
This kind of exercise can help (you to ) find your place in (przedimek, co to z tymi przedimkami jest?) group. Not everyone can be a leader JUST as not everyone should be a quiet servant.

What is more, along with 'next classes' (cos tu nie tak) young people can learn about 'the' (niepotr) responsibility and independence – especially at boarding schools and at 'the' (niepotr) university (if (przedimek) young man is living at the campus).
It is the best way to feel what 'is it' (zla kol slow) like to live on your own.

On the other hand life in school still seems to be far easier than the life which waits for (przedimek) young man after graduation day. For children in elementary school, for teenagers at college or students at university it could be the worst nightmare but as soon as they get their first job (if they will ever get one!), they will realise that all the school years were like never ending 'kinder garden' (nie jestem pewna, czy to nie pisze sie kindergarten? sprawdz)) where most of the kids were as smart as them, teachers were helpful and they didn’t have to worry about money.

On the whole, school 'help' (tutaj 3os.l.poj, school-it) young people to find their place in society but there isn’t a book which could truly prepare them to face 'the real life' (moze zamiast tego, napisz 'the reality of the outside world).

Masz problemy z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the) Prosze je WKUC raz na zawsze.

:D good one

No, bo to tak samo boli......

na początek bardzo dziękuję za sprawdzenie :)
w temacie jest błąd rzeczywiście. byłam głodna i zjadłam "s" przy słówku school. te przedimki... ;/ uczę się już tyle lat, ale kurde te przedimki ciągle mi umykają i nie wiem jak do tego podejść, żeby zapamiętać. więc najczęściej stawiam na chybił trafił, co zresztą widać, bo tam gdzie powinny być nie ma, a tam gdzie postawiłam to są needn't. ale będę wałkować to, aż się nauczę.

dziękuję raz jeszcze i masz rację pisze się kindergarten

'fresh' (zla czesc mowy) graduated man chodzi o to, że postawiłam przymiotnik, zamiast przysłówka?

along with 'next classes' (cos tu nie tak) - moim celem było napisać "wraz z następnymi klasami/wraz z przejściem z jednej klasy do następnej" chodzi o to, że wraz z wiekiem, mijającymi latami coś tak jakby along with the years passing by tylko uparłam się na klasy ^^