I am writing to apply for a Chemistry Enhancement Course at 'our' (Nasza? -cos nie tak) London Metropolitian University which I saw advertised in 'New Scientist' of 30th January (ale ktorego roku, dodaj).
I am a student of Electrical Engineering (duze litery, to nazwa wlasna) at 'AGH' (napisz w calosci)a University of Science and Technology in Cracow. I am particularly interested in this course because I love to work with children(tu cos brakuje) so I want a career (tu cos brakuje) teaching Chemistry in (cos brakuje) secondary school (cos brakuje) but my experience and qualifications for (cos brakuje) position of a teacher are (napisz 'currently') insufficient 'today' (niepotr. (To zdanie jest za dlugie, ma 3 rozne mysli).
I (tu cos brak) 'pasionate' (ortog) about science and I want to know more about Chemistry, Physics and Biology and (tu cos brak) develop specialist knowledge about 'that' (napisz cod odpowiedniejszego tu). I want to 'know' (daj inne slowo) 'a' (przed l. mn??) new people and (cos brak) 'eductonal' (ortog) system.
I would like to try my abilities and realize 'it' (to ma sie zgadzac z 'abilities' popraw) in secondary school. I 'belive' (ortog) that I am well-suited to a career in teaching and I (cos brak) keen to work in this field.
'I think that your university is very good' (nie rozumiem dlaczego 'stating the obvious') and lecturers have 'high qualifications' (nie, tak sie nie pisze, popraw) so your course would give me an excellent 'basics' (daj 'basis') for (cos brak) future occupational career.
NP.(new paragraph) I am available to start the course as soon as possible.
NP. I can be contacted at the above address or on 42[tel]at any time.
NP. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
A co z tymi przedimkami - trzeba je poprawic