system edukacji w Polsce

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Napisałem krótko o kożdym stopniu edukacji (od złobka do szkoły wyszej)
Sprawdzcie proszę pod względem językowym i jasności mojego przekazu. Mile widzianane sugestie.
Nursery:
• Nannies look after young children who are from 6 months to 3 years old.
• Kids play in the playground, sing songs and draw
Nannies put to sleep the babies and feed them

Kindergarten:
• Children learn there from 3 to 6 years old.
• Kids play, draw, sing songs and go on trips.
• Children are divided into four groups, from youngest to oldest. The oldest group is so-called „zerówka".
Primary school:
Students learn in this school 6 years. Children learn there from 6 to 12 years old.
At first three years children don’t learn different subjects and every class has got about three teachers. First teaches Polish, Maths and Knowledge About Society, second foreign language, usually English or German and third Religion, it’s usually a priest or a nun.
At next three years students start learning different subjects. Every subject is taught by different teacher. At the end of primary school students take a final exam.

High school:
There are three kinds of high school in Poland:
• Liceum Ogólnokształcące - something like Grammar High School in The UK (3 years)
• Secondary Technical School (4 years)
• Vocational High school
In Grammar High Schools students are divided into a few groups, it depends on the group of subjects are interested in (science, humanities and so on). Some high schools are bilingual class so some subjects are taught in foreign language.
High school finishes with high school leaving examination- called matura.
Students from bilingual class can take this exam in foreign language.

University:

 There are two kinds of University in Poland: private or state in Poland.
 At University students learn one the group of subjects which they chose.
 University isn’t obligatory school but lots of students go to this school, because well-educated people can easier find a good job.

 School year lasts 10 months from September to June in Poland for pupils.
 Students at University have shorter school year- 9 months from October to June.

Nursery:
• Nannies look after young children who are from 6 months to 3 years old.
• 'Kids' (nie uzywaj tego slowa, bo to sa malenkie jeszcze dzieci, jest slowo 'toddlers') play in the playground, sing songs and draw
Nannies put 'to sleep the babies' (cos tu nie tak, pomysl), and feed them (chociaz mysle, ze najpierw 'feed' a pozniej 'put to sleep')

Kindergarten:
• Children 'learn' (moze to za 'strong' lepiej...attend) there from (napisz ...the age of 3 until they are 6) 3 to 6 years old.
• 'Kids' (znowu te 'kids' to nie jest za ladne slowo) play, draw, sing songs and go on trips.
• 'Children' (a teraz children, nie mozna tak, 'children' tutaj pasuje lepiej) are divided into four groups, from (hello! a gdzie przedimek?) youngest to (przedimek) oldest. The oldest group is (przedimek) so-called „zerówka"(musisz to napisac po ang- lepiej 'level 0').
Primary school:
'Students' (generalnie o malych dzieciach nie mowimy 'students' tutaj daj children) 'learn' (nie, lepiej 'are taught') in this school (tu cos brak, jak ty to te zdania robisz? 6 years. Children learn there from (tu cos brak) 6 to (daj tutaj ...the age of)12. 'years old' (niepotr).
'At' (kalka - nie rob tego, piszesz przeciez po ang- tutaj DURING) (brak przedimka) first three years children don’t learn different subjects and every class has got 'about' (a jak to mozna rozumiec, mniej/wiecej 3, to dokladnie ile, musisz napisac) three teachers. (brak przedimke) first (ale kto? nie mozemy sie domyslac) teaches Polish, Maths and Knowledge About Society, (przedimek) second (daj tutaj 'cos) (przedimek) foreign language, usually English or German and (przedimek) third Religion, . (tutaj daj inaczej, ...In the case of religion, the teacher is) 'it’s' (niepotr) usually a priest or a nun.
'At' (znowu to, tutaj trzeba inaczej...In the following) 'next' (niepotr) three years 'students' (nie, daj tutaj 'children') start learning different subjects. Every subject is taught by (a gdzie przedimek?) different teacher. At the end of primary school 'students' (children) take a final exam.

High school:
There are three kinds of high school in Poland:
• Liceum Ogólnokształcące - something like Grammar High School in the UK (3 years)
• Secondary Technical School (4 years)
• Vocational High school
In Grammar High Schools students are divided into a few groups, 'it' (dokladnie do czego to 'it' sie odnosi, napisz w calosci) depends on the group of subjects (kto? co? musisz napisac) are interested in (science, humanities and so on). Some high schools 'are bilingual class' (cos tu nie tak) so some subjects are taught in (a gdzie przedimek? obrazil sie czy cos?) foreign language.
High school finishes with (przedimek) high school leaving examination- called (przedimek) Matura (daj to duza litera, to nazwa wlasna).
Students from 'bilingual class' (tu masz zle, albo 'from THE bilingual class, albo 'from bilingual classes, pisz to uwaznie, bo to sa glupie pomylki) can take this exam in (przedimek) foreign language.

University:
 There are two kinds of University in Poland: private or state (napisz tutaj 'funded') in Poland.
 At University students learn 'one the group' (tego nie rozumiem) of subjects which they chose.
 University isn’t (brak cos) obligatory school but 'lots of students' (to 'lots' mi sie tutaj nie podoba, to jest za niskie slowo, uzyj wiecej formalnego) go to this school, because well-educated people 'can easier find a good job' (ej, ej, cos mi tu za bardzo slowo w slowo tlumaczysz...napisz to poprawnie).
 (nie, tutaj napisz...An academic year)'School year' (niepotr) lasts 10 months from September to June. 'in Poland for pupils' (niepotr, ale nie nazywaj 'studentow' w Uni jako 'pupils' - bo to oznacza mlodszych dzieci). (mi sie wydaje ze to dales w zlym miejscu, bo tutaj masz opowiadac tylko o Uni)
 Students at University have shorter 'school' (nie pisz 'school year' tylko 'academic year') year- 9 months from October to June.

Guess what? Masz problemy z przedimkami, musisz sie tego nauczyc na pamiec....

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Nursery:
• Nannies look after young toddlers who are from 6 months to 3 years old.
• Babies play in the playground, sing songs and draw
Nannies feed them and put to sleep
Kindergarten:
• Children attend there from the age of 3 until 6.
• Children play, draw, sing songs and go on trips.
• They are divided into four groups, from the youngest to the oldest. The oldest group is so-called „zerówka".
Primary school:
Children are taught here 6 years. Pupils start Primary School at the age of 6.
During the first three years children don’t learn different subjects and every class has got at least three teachers. The first teaches Polish, Maths and Knowledge About Society, the second a foreign language, usually English or German and the third, for those students who want to study it, Religion. In the case of religion, the teacher is usually a priest or a nun.
In the following next three years students start learning different subjects. Every subject is taught by a different teacher. At the end of primary school children take a final exam.

Junior high school
Students learn 3 years in Junior High School in Poland
The first year:
After Primary School adolescents choose Junior High School where they want to study in. They attend lots of new courses.
The second year:
During the second year students continue education and also they are obligate to do educational project from selected school subject.
The third year:
Students have to attend final exams. They take 3 days and consist of 3 parts:
-Humanities
-Mathematics and Natural Science
-Foreign language


High school:
There are three kinds of high school in Poland:
• Liceum Ogólnokształcące - something like Grammar High School in The UK (3 years)
• Secondary Technical School (4 years)
• Vocational High school
In Grammar High Schools students are divided into a few groups. Every student can choose a group of school subjects in which he or she is really interested in (it could be science, humanities, nature and so on).
Some high schools have bilingual classes so some subjects are taught in the foreign language.
High school finishes with the high school leaving examination- called Matura. It is said that after this exam our students become mature

Students from bilingual classes can take this exam in the foreign language.

University:

 There are two kinds of University in Poland: private or state. Students from private university have to pay (they can obtain a special loan for tuition from the government)
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 University isn’t the obligatory school but many of students attend, because well-educated people can find a good job much easier.

 An academic year lasts from September to June in Poland for pupils from school.
 Students at University have shorter academic year - 9 months - from October to June.

In the following next three years ...
...school subjects in which he or she is really interested in.
High school finishes with the high school leaving examination- called Matura. /ja bym uzyl inne "konczy sie"/
... are taught in the foreign language.

 There are two kinds of University in Poland: private or state. Students from private university have to pay (they can obtain a special loan for tuition from the government)
.. tutaj mowimy o studiach w Polsce. Nie wiedzialam ze tam tez mozna dostac 'loans'?