Nowadays plenty of young people decide to study two degree courses at THE same time. They do 'it' (wg mnie lepsze bedzie THIS) because they want to have more than one diploma. They think 'it'(nie jestem pewna do czego to 'it' sie tutaj odnosi, ale wg mnnie, to mozna rozszerzyc,...that having two degrees') can help them to find work after studies.
In my opinion 'it' (tutaj dalabym such studies, i wtedy mozesz uzyc 'have') 'have' (jak piszesz it' -3os.l.poj, to HAS). good and bad sides.
Firstly I (tutaj brakuje modala, np will, shall) describe |(a gdzie przedimek, pamietaj o tych malenkich slowach) good sides. In my opinion 'it' (napisz studying two degree courses) is good for people who do not know what 'degree course' (moze inaczej...career path) to choose. Another good 'thing' (staraj sie uzywac wiecej rozmaicone slowa, np 'aspect') is that they may can find better (paid?) work than (przedimek) person who 'finish' (finishes) only one degree course. Someone who 'study' (zla czesc mowy, tutaj trzeba 'studies'-czasownik, I study, he studies, someone studies) 'on' (kalka z polskiego, niepotr) two degree courses can meet more people than (przedimek) person who 'study' (zla czesc mowy j/w) only 'on' (niepotr) one degree course. Meeting people is 'good' (nadmiernie uzywasz tego 'good' poszukaj inne slowa) because everyone 'is good at' (moze lepiej..'has talent for') something and can 'learn' (nie, nie, pamietaj, a teacher teaches, a student learns - jak ktos Cie uczy, to jest on twoim teacher, and he can teach you) you about it. It is definitely 'good' (znowu to 'good' poszukaj inne slowa) for smart people.
(przedimek) bad sides of this kind (tu cos brak) decision are that not everyone can 'learn' (moze inne slowo np 'concentrate') well on two degree courses. They may have not 'enough' (dobre slowo, ale staraj sie uzywac wiecej formalne, np 'sufficient') time to learn everything 'what' (kalka z polskiego, tutaj THAT) they should.
When someone decideS to study on two degree courses at same time 'she or he' (zla kol, jak juz to 'he or she' ale mozna powiedziec 'they') can (tutaj jestes za bardzo zdecydowany, ale trzeba to ..may not have enough time) 'have no time' for other aspects of life (jak masz wolne slowa tyo mozna rozszerzyc, np ...podajac te inne aspekty, np rodzina), because there are 'so many' (staraj sie o wiecej formalne slowa, np 'numerous') things to learn.
'In sum' (tu uzywasz 2 slowa, a mozna, 'concluding' summarising'- staraj sie mniej slow, ale lepsze) studying on two degree courses 'at same time' (a moze 'simultaneously') is 'good' (znowu 'good'-poszukaj cos innego) for smart people, but when someone is not 'that clever' (tutaj daj jedno slowo, np 'able') 'she or he' (he or she, ale lepiej 'they' to mniej slow i znaczy to samo) should focus on one degree course.