Sprawdzenie kilku zdań, PILNE

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Witam bardzo prosze o poprawe chociaz wiekszych bledow. Musze to miec na rano

1. I usually have to remember to turn off the flat iron and other electric domestic appliances. I must remember to check windows close and I must remember feed my cat because he is furious when he is hungry.
2. Yes when I was child I collected old coins. I had a lot of olds coins from many world corners, but late hat was too boring for me later I sell that coins.
3. I was lazy by nature and I often distracted by sms or my cat. Often when I study visits me my friend or my neighbor and I must stop study.
4. Yes I must pass driving license but it is really difficult. I can’t pass my driving exam although I can correctly drive and even I have own car. I have hope, I finnaly pass that exam.
5. Last weekend was really tiring. On Saturday morning I cleaned my house and my car. Then I visited my friend Szymon and we were in food shop. In the evening I was on Szymon birthday party. Party was really cool although I have destroyed my mobile phone. On Sunday I sleep half-day. Then I was in church and I meet my friend Johny. I was very tired round the clock…
1. I usually have to remember to turn off the flat iron and other 'electric' (niepotr) domestic appliances. I must remember to check IF (przedimek) windows ARE closeD and I must remember TO feed my cat because he is furious when he is hungry.
2. I had a lot of olds coins from many 'world corners' (zla kol slow...corners of the world), but lateR That was too boring for me later I 'sell' (czas przeszly) that coins.
3. I was lazy by nature and I often (cos brak) distracted by sms or my cat. Often when I study 'visits me my friend or my neighbor' ( zla kol slow, my friends or ....) and I must stop 'study' (cont).
4. Yes I must pass (przedimek) driving 'license' (zle slowo, tuttaj 'test')but it is really difficult. I can’t pass my driving exam although I can 'correctly drive' (zla kol slow) and 'even I' (zla kol slow) have own car. I 'have' (niepotr) hope THAT, I' finnaly' (najpierw modal pozniek ortog) pass that exam.
5. In the evening I was 'on' (kalka z polskiego nie rob tego tutaj AT) Szymon'S birthday party. (przedimek) party was really cool although I 'have' (niepotr) destroyed my mobile phone. On Sunday I 'sleep' (czas przeszly) half-day. Then I was in church and I 'meet' (czas przeszly) my friend JohnNy. …
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