short story

They met at party. Ryan fancied Hannah and he chated Her up .
First, Ryan asked Hannah out. They went for a walk in the park and they got on well.
Ryan and Hannah fell in love with each other.
One day Hannah fell out with Ryan because he missed out on a date, but the same day Ryan apologised Hannah for and gave her a beautiful, red rose and they made up.
Two years later Ryan got engaged to Hannah. She agreed and finally they got married and they lives long and happily.

Proszę o sprawdzenie.

They met at (przedimek) party. Ryan fancied Hannah and he 'chated' (ortog) 'Her' (mala litera) up .
One day Hannah fell out with Ryan because he 'missed out' (to jest zle) on a date, but the same day Ryan apologised (cos tu brak) Hannah for (ale co?) and gave her a beautiful, red rose and they made up.
She agreed and finally they got married and they 'lives' (they lives?) 'long and happily' (nie za bardzo...happily ever after).

Nie wiem po co "She agreed" w tym zdaniu jezeli w poprzednim jest:

masz racje. Chociaz wiem, ze 'being engaged' to jest jedno, a 'proposal of marriage' to cos innego.
Tutaj, 'she agreed to get married'......

Wciaz cos nie tak. "Ryan got engaged to Hannah" u nas znaczy ze sie zgodzila wyjsc za niego. Czy jest inaczej w BrE?

No, it's the same. To get engaged you must propose to somebody....

So, Hannah must have agreed to marry Ryan in this sentence: Two years later Ryan got engaged to Hannah.

Yeah, the next sentence is wrong until you say Ryan proposed to Hanna instead engaged to her....

zaręczyła się.

A czymze sa zareczyny jak nie obietnica malzenstwa i zgoda na nie?

widocznie w slowniku bylo get engaged jako oswiadczyc sie
jasne, ze powinno byc
Ryan proposed to Hanna and she agreed to marry him

zareczyny sa po to zeby kobieta dostala drogi pierscionek, (ktory pozniej i tak zatrzymuje).

Ktos mi tu nad glowa stoi i mowi ze chlopak sie zaręcza albo o parze, ze sie zaręczyli ale nie o dziewczynie /?/

Dlatego ja wszystkim radze: cubic zirconia :)