Pomoc w wypracowaniu.

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Czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić moje zadanie? Jestem strasznie kiepska z angielskiego, a mam do napisania wypracowanie. Z góry dziękuję osobom, które zechcą mi pomóc!

People want to live comfortably, easily and pleasantly, so improving equipment to meetour requirements. We become slaves to new technology. Technical is changing at a fast pace.
The new arrangements are to facilitate our lives, and yet the time that we make us somehow escapes. With mobile phones one can find us - wherever we were. Laptops and the Internet turn our vacation into an endless time. "Internet Highway" allows smooth, quick and unfettered journey thoughts, ideas, concepts, judgments and opinions. The new technology realized the ideals of freedom of speech, conscience, access to information. Man can`t imagine life without it. Certain activities no longer require our participation - have been automated. More and less likely to visit, we prefer to call or send text messages, chat via Skype, send an e-mail. Replaces our robot, computer, machine, indeed, without them we can no longer cope. Many factories have been automated so a lot of people lost they job.
Products of modern technology are often too expensive for an average person. I frequently notice people are sad because A friend has cool gadgets on which they haven't got money. Such situations lead even to depression.
Today we live in times of dynamic progress of civilization. Never before in the history ofthe changes did not occur so quickly, and it is expected that over time they will be even faster. Keep in mind though, that many phenomena, including and progress of civilization, has two faces - it's positive, carrying many comforts of humanity and that which is associated with many risks.

People want to live comfortably, easily and pleasantly, so 'improving equipment to meet our requirements' (tego nie rozumiem) .
Technical (ale co? gdzie jest rzeczownik?) is changing at a fast pace.
The new arrangements are to facilitate our lives, and yet the time that we 'make' (daj inne slowo) 'us' (nie rozumiem tego) somehow escapes. With mobile phones 'one' (znowu ten 'one' napisz to poprawnie) can find us - wherever we were.
Laptops and the Internet turn our vacation into 'an endless time' (tego nie rozumiem). "Internet Highway" allows (a gdzie przedimek?) smooth, quick and unfettered journey thoughts, ideas, concepts, judgments and opinions. The new technology 'realized' (ciekawe dlaczego czas przeszly?) the ideals of freedom of speech, conscience, access to information.
Certain activities no longer require our participation - (tu cos brak) have been automated.
'More and less likely to visit' (tego nie rozumiem) , we prefer to call or send text messages, chat via Skype, send an e-mail.
(kto? co?) (tu cos brak) 'replaces' (zle slowo) our robot , computer, machine, indeed, without them we can no longer cope. Many factories have been automated so a lot of people lost 'they' (zle slowo) job.
(przedimek) products of modern technology are often too expensive for an average person. I frequently notice people are sad because a friend has cool gadgets 'on' (po co to?) which they haven't got. 'money' (niepotr). Such situations CAN lead even to depression.
Never before in the history 'of the changes did not occur so quickly' (to niema zadnego sensu), and it is expected that over time they will be even faster. Keep in mind though, that many phenomena, including 'and' (nie rozumiem tego) progress of civilization, has two faces - it's positive, carrying many comforts of humanity and that which is associated with many risks.