Broszura Reklamowa Marrakech

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Witam!
Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie błędów.

We invite you to Travel agency "Trip around the world" !
We organize trips to every country in the world! They are really sightseeing and relaxation.
The hot hit in this year is a trip to the Marrakech.
The Marrakech is located in south - western Marocco, on the edge of the Sahara desert. Near the Marrakech are the Atlas Mountains. In the Marrakech some People from different countries. We can meet some Europeans, especially the French. In the Marrakech many people are Berbers. In the Marrakech you can eat a lot of special, for example - delicious fruit, tagine ( a traditional dish of meat and fruit ), and rich spices.
In the Marrakech is a lot of interesting thing to do. You can visit famous monuments ( e.g. Koutoubia mosque ), ride a camel, and visit the Sahara desert. And for the brave people - climbing in the Atlas Mountains.
Don't miss this opportunity! Reservation from now! You don't need a lot of money, it isn't expensive. Call us now, don't wait.

Z góry bardzo dziękuje i pozdrawiam
Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić? Bo nie wiem jakie błędy popeniłem.
We invite you to Travel agency "Trip around the world" ...(tego zdania nie za bardzo rozumiem, nie jest mi jasne)!
We organize trips to every country in the world(!) (Co to znowu z tymi wykrzyknikami? Nie musisz tego krzysczec)
They are really 'sightseeing and relaxation' (tutaj albo cos brakuje albo cos nie jest tak jak powinno byc).
The hot hit in this year is a trip to 'the' (niepotr) Marrakech.
'The' (niepotr) Marrakech is located in south - western 'Marocco' (popraw), on the edge of the Sahara desert. Near 'the' (niepotr) Marrakech are the Atlas Mountains. In 'the' (niepotr) Marrakech (tu cos brakuje) 'some' (zle slowo) people from different countries (np jakie?) .
In 'the' (niepotr) Marrakech many people are 'Berbers' (co to znaczy musisz napisac). In 'the' (niepotr) Marrakech you can eat a lot of special (special CO musisz napisac), for example - delicious fruit, tagine ( a traditional dish of meat and fruit ), and rich spices.
In 'the' (niepotr) Marrakech (cos brakuje) is a lot of interesting 'thing' (tutaj l. mn) to do.

poczytaj jeszcze raz o uzywaniu przedimkow (a, an, the), i sprawdz nazwy miast.

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