Essay - Many artists (musicians, actors) should not engage in politics

Nowadays, many artists among other things musicians and actors, should not engage in politics and solve political problems. There are as many pros as cons to consider.

Firstly, famous people involve in politics in order to be more popular in television, media and newspapers. It is not a good idea to be more popular. They arouse interest among people. It is a kind of advertisement for them. They often take part in election trail to give people the incentive to vote in elections. Voters can see the famous people in electoral campaign.
What is more, some artists are ignorant about politics. Their popularity should not affect other people's opinion. It often happens that famous people are not have enough time. It's hard to connect the music profession and take part in political life.
On the other hand, famous people and their popularity attract attentions. Their fans are more eager focus on political issues. I am of the opinion that artists are normal people and they often want to help others. They are more sensitive. Their popularity can contribute to organize a charity actions.
To sum up, I must admit that I am more convinced that some people for example musicians, actors should not to involve in politics. They have no experience in politics and politics are a good opportunity for them to be more popular.


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Nowadays, many artists among other 'things' (nazywasz artystow 'things' - przeciez to tez sa ludzie - poszukaj inne slowo) musicians and actors, should not engage in politics and solve political problems.

Firstly, famous people (tu cos brak) 'involve' (zle slowo) in politics in order to be more popular 'in' ON television, media and (cos brak) newspapers.
They often take part in (cos brak) election trail to give people the incentive to vote in elections. Voters can see the famous people in electoral campaignS.
It often happens that famous people 'are' DO not have enough time.
On the other hand, famous people and their popularity attract 'attentions' (l. poj). Their fans are more eager TO focus on political issues.
Their popularity can contribute to organize 'a' (niepotr, bo 'actions' to l. mn) charity actions.
To sum up, I must admit that I am more convinced that some people for example musicians, actors should not 'to involve' (cos tu nie tak) in politics.

Mozesz tez dodac, ze w USA, aktorzy dostaja sie na wysokie stanowiska (np Reagan),

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Czy może być tak:
Nowadays, many artists for instance musicians and actors, should not engage in politics and solve political problems.

Firstly, famous people are interested in politics in order to be more popular on television, media and the newspapers.

They often take part in the election trail to give people the incentive to vote in elections.

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