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The reason for a disaster date
Dates are tough – spending a few hours in the company of someone you barely know is a pretty unnatural thing to do.
Physical desirability is the most important feature that decide on the date. Date will not be successfully completed if people not interested in their physical appearance. Therefore it is essential to meet with someone who intrigues us physically.
Another important issue is the difference of character. Often, people are worried about what they will be talking with the other person. This is due to out of here, they do not have common interests. Probably they are at different stages of life and the difference a few generations divides them.
One more reason for which the date will be a disaster is different expectations how to looks like a date. An important factor in the success of dating are the weather conditions and comfortable place. None of us likes to get wet in the rain or stand in traffic jam, so it is advisable to carefully plan a date.
Some characteristics of our character can contribute to the failure of dating. If you only offer a glass of water, certainly the other person finds that we are miserly and refuse to meet with you again.
In conclusion it is impossible to plan the perfect date, but you remember to feel comfortable and at ease. Even if you do not find the right person let try to end a date in a nice and gentlemanly manner so never it will be a disaster.

The reason for a 'disaster' (zla czesc mowy) date
Physical desirability is the most important feature that 'decide' (feature tutaj jest 3os.l.poj) on the date. (cos brak) date will not be successfully completed if people (cos tu brak) not interested in their physical appearance.
Often, people are worried about what they will be talking (tu cos brak) with the other person. This is due 'to out of here' (tego nie rozumiem) , they do not have common interests. Probably they are at different stages of life and the difference (cos tu brak) a few generations divides them.
One more reason for which the date will be a disaster is different expectations 'how to looks like a date' (tego nie rozumiem - o czym mowa) . 'An important factor' (ale podajesz 2 factors - dlaczego nie l. mn?) in the success of dating are the weather conditions and (cos tu brak) comfortable place. None of us likes to get wet in the rain or stand in (cos tu brak) traffic jam, so it is advisable to carefully plan 'a' (tutaj dalabym THE) date.
If you only offer a glass of water, certainly the other person finds that we are miserly and (tu cos brak, daj modal) refuse to meet with you again.
In conclusion it is impossible to plan the perfect date, but you (tu cos brakuje daj modal) remember to feel comfortable and at ease. Even if you do not find the right person 'let' (niepotr) try to end 'a' THE date in a nice and gentlemanly manner so 'never it will' (zla kol slow) be a disaster.

Cytat:
a 'disaster' (zla czesc mowy) date
??? Wg mnie reason nie pasuje do kontekstu.
edytowany przez fui_eu: 18 lis 2012

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