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One day there was a teenager named Becky. She was 16 years old and she lived in a quiet city near by London. She was prepared on a school trip, but she wasn't aware of the accident she faced.
Becky was a pretty girl who liked school. She was call "Pupil" by some classmates, but she didn't care about it at all. She was blonde and she was smart. She also was kind, calm, sensitive and sometimes anxious about some classmates who were sometimes rude to younger kids from school. She thought it is normal in this age, but on the school trip she was all agog.
It started on Monday afternoon when they had a free time. She with 4 other classmates were alone in the forest. They thought they were save there, but they weren't. After 10 minutes of walking around they heard some voice. It was a growling or something like that. It became quite plain to Becky that it could be a danger animal so she wanted to get back, but the boys were interested of it and they wanted to find a source of the sound. She was frightened and didn't want to be alone so she went with them. She got her adrenalin going, but the worst was still to come. The sound was louder and lauder, but they didn't want to turn back. It was then that they saw a big bear who was eating a ham. The boys weren't scared like Becky was. They decided to take a picture of the beer. When one of the boys pressed the apparat button the bear noticed them. It was caused by flash. They forgot to switch flash off. Becky terrors reached their height and boys started to run as quick as they could. They flew of the handles and they were scared stiff, but Becky was the only one who knew what exactly to do. Even if her heart quickened she was open-minded. She was just standing. It was enough to avoid a bear attack. She told them to do the same so they did. Boys nerves were frayed, but it was the only one option they had. It was then that the bear came closer to them, smelled them and turned back. A panickly feeling still came over them, but they were save. Then they ran out of the forest and finally they can relaxed.
Next day when she was on the way to the school the boys stood on her way. They apologized her and promised to be more open-minded.

One 'day' (tutaj wiecej pasuje slowo 'time') there was a teenager named Becky. She was 16 years old and she lived in a quiet city near 'by' (daj tutaj 'to') London. She was 'prepared' (zle slowo) 'on' (zle slowo) a school trip, but she wasn't aware of the accident she faced.
She was 'call' (zly czas) "Pupil" by some classmates, but she didn't care about it at all.
It started on Monday afternoon when they had 'a' (niepotr) free time.
They thought they were 'save' (zle slowo) there, but they weren't. After 10 minutes of walking around they heard 'some' (tutaj lepiej 'a') voice.
It became quite plain to Becky that it could be a 'danger' (zla czesc mowy) animal so she wanted to get back, but the boys were interested 'of' (zle slowo) it and they wanted to find 'a' THE source of the sound.
The sound was louder and 'lauder' (ortog), but they didn't want to turn back. It was then that they saw a big bear who was eating 'a' (niepotr) ham.
They decided to take a picture of the 'beer' ('beer' to jest piwo, popraw). When one of the boys pressed the 'apparat' (co to niby jest?) button the bear noticed them. 'It' THIS was caused by (cos brak) flash. They forgot to switch (cos brak) flash off. Becky terrors reached their height and (cos brak) boys started to run as 'quick' (zla czesc mowy) as they could. They 'flew of the handles' (calkowicie zle kojarzenie, nie uzywaj takich zwrotow) and they were scared stiff, but Becky was the only one who knew 'what exactly' (zla kol slow) to do.
(cos brak) boys nerves were frayed, but it was the only one option they had.
A 'panickly' (ortog) feeling still came over them, but they were 'save' (popraw, to jest zle slowo). Then they ran out of the forest and finally they 'can' (zle slowo, tutaj COULD) 'relaxed' (relax).
Next day when she was on the way to 'the' (niepotr) school the boys stood 'on' (zle slowo) her way. They apologized (cos brak) her and promised to be more open-minded.

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