disabled

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I think that the situation of disabled in Poland is not admirable. Frankly speaking their situation is incredibly difficult. They get menial jobs, if any, they can’t leave home without somebody’s help (for example because of some architectural obstacles) and they are also saddled with costs of their treatment and rehabilitation. The handicapped find it difficult to make ends meet. The sum of money that they get from the government is ridiculous small. It’s often not enough to health-care coverage. The handicapped should be foster by government and get bigger disability allowance. Moreover many disabled people would like to work, but few offices decide to employ them. The truth is that physically handicapped are completely able to work in jobs that don’t require full efficiency of the body. For example: paraplegic can work as an analyst. It can be said that solving problem of money is an half of success.
Another problem is the attitude of the able-bodied towards not only physically but mentally handicapped as well. These people are often objects of pity and ridicule. They feel rejected by society. It can be said they are discriminate. I firmly believe that our attitude towards handicapped members of our society has to change. We don’t think about their feelings, until disability happens to us. Only then we could realize how cruel is to be left by all “friends” and how difficult is using stairs or other architecture traps (normal for the able-bodied).
The situation of the disabled in our country is very bad but I hope it can improve if we all make an effort. A lot can be done by architects, social workers, therapists and doctors, government but the biggest changes can be done by each of us. It is worth trying, because nobody knows in what condition we will be tomorrow or in 20 years.

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I think that the situation of disabled (albo tu cos brakuje, albo musisz dac przedimek oprzed slowem) in Poland is not admirable.
The 'handicapped' (to nie jest to samo co disabled) find it difficult to make ends meet. The sum of money that they get from the government is 'ridiculous' (zla czesc mowy) small. It’s often not enough 'to' (zle slowo) health-care coverage. The 'handicapped' (zmien) should be 'foster' (zle slowo ale i tak zla czesc mowy) by (cos brak) government and get 'bigger' (nie za bardzo lubie to slowo tutaj) disability allowance. Moreover many disabled people would like to work, but few 'offices' (nie, napisz 'firms') decide to employ them. The truth is that (cos brak) physically handicapped are completely able to work in jobs that don’t require full efficiency of the body. For example: (przedimek) paraplegic can work as an analyst. It can be said that solving (przedimek) problem of money is 'an' (niepotr) half 'of' (zmienilabym to) success.
It can be said they are 'discriminate' (zla czesc mowy i brakuje slowa). I firmly believe that our attitude towards (przedimek) handicapped members of our society has to change. We don’t think about their feelings, until (przedimek) disability happens to us. Only then we 'could' (niepotr) realize how cruel is to be left by all “friends” and how difficult IT is using stairs or other architecturAL traps (normal for the able-bodied).
It is worth trying, because nobody knows in what (daj tutaj 'physical or mental') condition we will be tomorrow or in 20 years TIME.

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I think that the situation of disabled in Poland is not admirable.
The disabled find it difficult to make ends meet. The sum of money that they get from the government is really small. It’s often not enough health-care coverage. Many disabled people would like to work, but few firms decide to employ them. The truth is that a physically handicapped are completely able to work in jobs that don’t require full efficiency of the body. For example: the paraplegic can work as an analyst. It can be said that solving the problem of money is half of success.
It can be said they are victim of discrimination.
 I firmly believe that our attitude towards the disabled members of our society has to change. We don’t think about their feelings, until the disability happens to us. Only then we realize how cruel is to be left by all “friends” and how difficult it is using stairs or other architectual traps (normal for the able-bodied).
It is worth trying, because nobody knows in what mential condition we will be tomorrow or in 20 years time.