Rozprawka - Are you for or against for capital punishment??

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Are you for or against capital punishment?
The capital punishment is a controversial topic nowadays. There are a lot of people who are for or against. This is legal in some country like China or The United States. But this is illegal too in some place in the world like all Europe. Everything has disadvantages and advantages. What are the pros and cons of capital punishment?
First of all, if someone who commited a crime in the past was cursed with life imprisonment without eligible for parole stay in prison forever. Life imprisonment hold out on insulate criminal from all society. Lifer spend all life in prison and die there.
Secondly, some religion like Catholics do not follow it. For example polish Pope John Paul II was a big opponent. He used to said that all society should respect, protect and consolidate dignity all human being at any moment.
Thirdly, capital punishment is not reversible. If court delivered a bad verdict it is mean that someone was condemned for crime which he did not commit.
On the other hand capital punishment has some advantages. For instance capital punishment prohibit commit different crime by one person. If someone die he can not hurt anybody in the future.
What else, capital punishment deter other people commit a crime. Survey of public opinion execute by American Scientists showed that capital punishment deter criminal to commit a crime and safe potential victim.
Finally capital punishment is just fair for killer, rapist, child molester etc. If someone killed, hurt, rape or torture another person have to carry consequences.
In conclusion it seems that capital punishment has as many benefits as drawbacks. In my opinion death penalty is a good solution for criminals. I am happy that exist something like this in our world.

'The (niepotr) capital punishment is a controversial topic nowadays. There are a lot of people who are' for or against' (nie moga byc i tak i tak) . 'This' (ale co?) is legal in some 'country' (ale przeciez jak wymieniasz wiecej jak jeden to chyba l. mn) like China or The United States. But this is illegal too in some 'place' (tylko jednym?) in the world 'like' (przestan, do ch jasnej uzywac tego 'like' w ten sposob - co to znaczy?) all Europe.
First of all, if someone who commited a crime in the past was 'cursed' (zle slowo) with life imprisonment without (brakuje slowa) eligible for parole 'stay' (nie rozumiem o co chodzi) in prison forever. Life imprisonment 'hold out' (nie rozumiem) on 'insulate' (zle slowo) criminal from all society. 'Lifer' (to jest kolokw) 'spend' (zla forma) all life in prison and 'die' (zla forma) there.
Secondly, some religion 'like' (przestan z tym bo dsie wsciekne. Czy tylko to 'like' musi byc co chweile - nie znasz innych slow) Catholics do not follow 'it.' (dokladnie czego?) For example 'polish' (duza litera) Pope John Paul II was a big opponent (ale od czego?). He used to 'said' (zle slowo) that all society should respect, protect and consolidate dignity (brak slowa) all human 'being' ('all daje mi znac, ze jest wiecej jak jeden) at any moment.
If court delivered a 'bad' (kolokw) verdict it 'is' (niepotrt) 'mean' (it-3os.l.poj) that someone was condemned for (przedimek) crime which he did not commit.
For instance capital punishment 'prohibit' (zla forma) 'commit different crime' (popraw - nie rozumiem) by one person. If someone 'die' (zla forma) he can not hurt anybody in the future (nawet jak on byl niewinny?).
'What else' (mnie sie pytasz? co cos?), capital punishment 'deter' (zla forma) other people (brak slowa) 'commit' (zla forma) a crime. (przedimek) Survey of public opinion 'execute' (czas przeszly) by American Scientists showed that capital punishment 'deter' (zla forma) (przedimek)criminal 'to' FROM 'commit' (zla forma) a crime and 'safe' (zle slowo) (przedimek) potential victim.
Finally capital punishment is just fair for (przedimek) killer, rapist, child molester 'etc' (nie pisz tak, w jaki sposob moze to byc fair dla etc? Kim on jest?). If someone killed, hurt, rape or torture another person (cos brak) have to carry (cos brak) consequences.
In my opinion (przedimek) death penalty is a good solution for criminals. I am happy that 'exist something like this' (zla kol slow...something like..) in our world.

nie wszyscy to wiedza, terri. Gdyby wiedzeli moze by pisali poprawnie i niebylo by potrzeby na istnienie tego forum. Naprawde nie potrzebnie sie pienisz.

yyy dziękuję za pomoc aczkolwiek myślę, że jeśli zrobiłaś to z łaski to mogłaś sobie odpuścić. Niestety mój angielski nie jest na tak zaawansowanym poziomie jak zapewne twój dlatego napisałam na forum z prośbą o pomoc... odnośnie "like" widocznie nie znam innych słów skoro używałam tylko tego.

oluss 00
Na tym tekscie akurat to bylam bardzo lagodna. Co do 'like' to jest niezreczne slowo, ktore dzisiejsza mlodziez uzywa, i ktore pieni wszystkich. To 'like' to tak jakby ktos wbijal gwozdzie do reki.

NIC w zyciu nie robie z laski - po to idz do innych ludzi, ale tylko poprawiam teksty. To, musisz zrozumiec, jako 'zacheta' na przyszla nauke, i nie oczekuje ze od razu pojedziesz na mnie z takim personalnym atakiem. Tsak, znam ang. lepiej od Ciebie i dlatego trace swoj cenny czas, zeby Ci pokazac droge - ale ty wolisz na mnie jechac. Juz nigdy wiecej.