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“Rita’s café” is a big restaurant located on Flower Street in London.
You can find it slightly away from center.
It is one of greasy spon which are so called because any cutlery that comes into contact with the food on offer is immediately coated with a sticky, greasy layer of lard. It almost seems like an oily mist hangs in the air, as if flat drips from the walls. They fuelling the population with bacon, egg and sausage.
They have large glass window, a plastic sign with the name of the café and a huge menu offering a wide variety of artery clogging delights. Inside you will see old wooden seats, tables covered with cracked linoleum and plain walls. Each table has on it a bottle of brown sauce, tomato ketchup and vinegar, and pots of salt and pepper.
In “Rita’s café” you will find people from all walks of life. Poets,
drop-outs, hurrying businessmen, student lazing around with huge mugs of tea. Some read novels, some stare into space, and others catch up on the day’s news. They are all united by one thing: the food. They are all looking for some seriously stodgy grub.
The meals are dangerously unhealthy , and absolutely delicious. All kinds of fried food can be bought for incredibly low prices. The centerpiece is the traditional English breakfast. At least two pieces of bacon, two sizzling sausages, two fried eggs, fried mushrooms, baked beans and bread soaked in hot oil and fried.
If you want eat something fast and cheap you can go to this restaurant. But you must remember, that this food is very unhealthy. Eat something in
„Rita’s cafe” is good idea only from time to time, because your health is the most important thing in your life.
You can find it 'slightly' (ile to jest slightly) away from center.
It is one of (tutaj brakuje pare slow) greasy 'spon' (ortog) which are so called because any cutlery that comes into contact with the food on offer is immediately coated with a sticky, greasy layer of lard.
They (cos brak) fuelling the population with bacon, egg and sausage.
'They' (kto to jest to 'they'?) have large glass window, a plastic sign with the name of the café and a huge menu offering a wide variety of artery clogging delights.
'Eat' (zle slowo) something in „Rita’s cafe” is good idea only from time to time, because your health is the most important thing in your life.

Nie nazywaj 'greasy spoon' restauracja - to jest cafe.

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