More and more people 'decided' (zle slowo) to study two 'fields' (daj inne slowo) simultaneously. This state of affairs 'have' (dlaczego 'have' a nie 'has'?) positive and 'bad' (nie, napisz negative - wtedy bedzie balance, good/bad, positive/begative) sides.
First I 'depict' (daj inne slowo) (a gdzie przedimek?) pluses of this situation.
The main benefit is 'broaden' (zle slowo) 'theirs' (zle slowo) knowledge. The students have (przedimek) possibility to gain more skills, which are useful in 'adults life' (cos tu nie tak). What is more they will possess a 'widely' (zla forma mowy) extent of information than other graduates, as a result they 'will can' ( dlaczego 2 modale obok siebie?) the better and well-paid job and (przedimek) quicker possibility of promotion.
On the other hand 'study' (zla forma mowy) two fields is very tiring, and the young people can feel 'exhaustion' (zla forma mowy).
Another 'drawbacks' (dlaczego tu jest l. mn?) of this state of things is (przedimek) lack of time. Often they must 'learning' (zle zlowo) 'during' (niepotr) all (przedimek) time, therefore they can not 'using' (daj inne slowo) (cos brak) students life, and take part in parties, other events or dating.
Last but not least is wasting valuable time on learning useless information, instead (cos brak) 'gain' (zle slowo) first experience in (przedimek) job.
Taking everything into account, thanks to acquired knowledge students 'are' (niepotr, ale brakuje slowa i przedimka) 'possible' (zla forma mowy) to find (przedimek) well-paid job and are 'on ' (zle slowo) (przedimek) better position than others, but they must devote a lot of 'theirs' (nie, tu masz zle slowo, ma byc THEIR) time on learning, as a result the best period in 'theirs' (popraw) 'live' (zla forma mowy) is missing. Despite 'of' (daj 'the') many advantages simultaneous studying (cos brak) two fields is not for 'all' (daj tu slowo'everyone').