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I'm writing this letter to you, because I want to tell you about my holiday in London.
I'm living in big hotel. This is Great! There os near town and there are a swimming pool and good stuff. I saw already a Big Ben. I was also London Eye. This is amazing! I saw a Tower Bridge. In my opinion this bridge is the most amazing in the world.
Tommorow I'm going to Chelsea Physic Garden. This is the oldest botanical garden in Great Britain.
I hope to I will meet you, when I was return to home. Please, you call to me, when you got a this letter.

All the best
XYZ

Jak można to na dziś... :)

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Na poczatek: unikasz przedimkow lub stawiasz zle. Zla kolejnosc w zdaniu o Big Ben. 'There IS a swimming pool and other good stuff. 'I hope to I will meet you, when I was return to home. Please, you call to me, when you got a this letter.'

I was also London Eye. Co tam robiles? Jechales na nim? Musisz cos dodac.

I'm writing this letter to you, because I want to tell you about my holiday in London.
I'm living in big hotel. This is Great! There is near town and there is a swimming pool and other good stuff. I already saw a Big Ben. I was also London Eye. I drove on London Eye. This is amazing! I saw a Tower Bridge. In my opinion this bridge is the most amazing in the world.
Tommorow I'm going to Chelsea Physic Garden. This is the oldest botanical garden in Great Britain.
I hope that I will meet you, when I'm returning at home. Please, you call me, when you are getting a this letter.

All the best
XYZ

A teraz?

walnalem sie tam, przepraszam z tym drive, blad

Lepiej ... I am staying in A ..... Nie bedzie A Big Ben bo jest tylko jeden, prawda? To samo z tym nieszczesnym mostem.
tommorow???? Takich bledow nie powinienes robic. ... I return home miales dobrze, czego zmieniles tense? tez mozesz dac get home. Ja bym zgubil ON in I rode on London Eye 'I was also London Eye.' to zdanie jest redundant.