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Dear Amy,
How are you? I hope you're well. Thanks very much for the MP3 player. It's brilliant. I will be applying it very often. I really enjoyed my birthday.
You won't believe what happend . My aunt came which I have not seen before. She did me a great surprise. Her arrival was the best gift.
I got lots of wonderful presents:tennis racket, money box and a lot of sweets.
My parents bought phone which I'm dreamed so much for me! It was amanzig day.

See you soon, I hope. And thanks again for the MP3 player.
Best wishes
Ewa

PS My sister send their love too.

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I will be applying it very often. - złe slowo. Jak będzie "używać"?
My aunt came which I have not seen before. - co masz na myśli?
She did me a great surprise. - Spróbuj inaczej: To była duża niespodzianka dla mnie.
tennis racket, money box - a gdzie przedimki?
My parents bought me (przedimek?) phone which I'm dreamed so much for me! - co masz na myśli?
My sister send (Present Simple, 3 os. lp) their (ICH?) love too.