Kilkuzdaniowy tekst na poziomie gimnazjum.

In the future I would like to be a doctor. This profession fascinate me, because I feel strong desire helping people and saving their life. The doctor profession has a lot of advantages. It is very necessary. It inspires confidence and respect of all people. The most important advantage this profession is the view of healthy, satisfied patients and awareness saving their lives. It is also a well-paid job, but it isn't the most important. The disadvantage this profession is the lack regular hours of work and exhausting mentally and physically duties. A doctor should have such character traits as: empathy, patience, responsibility. He should be strong mentally, be resistant to stress and can make decisions quickly. A doctor subordinate his life saving other people. He is obliged to continually grow and learn throughout his lives.

Proszę o sprawdzenie:)

This profession 'fascinate' (3os.l.popj -it-) me, because I feel (przedimek) strong desire (tu brak slowa)helping people and saving their 'life' (daj l. mnoga). 'The doctor' (daj This) profession has a lot of advantages. It is very necessary (dla kogo?) .
The most important advantage (brak slowa) this profession is the view of healthy, satisfied patients and awareness (brak slowa) saving their lives. It is also a well-paid job, but 'it' (daj 'this) isn't the most important. The disadvantage (brak slowa) this profession is the lack (cos brak) regular hours of work and 'exhausting mentally and physically' (nie, napisz to mentally and physically exhausting) duties. A doctor should have 'such' (daj ...the following) character traits 'as' (niepotr): empathy, patience, responsibility. He should be strong mentally, be resistant to stress and 'can' (zle slowo, tutaj 'should') make decisions quickly. A doctor 'subordinate' (zle slowo, moze dedicates) his life (brak slowa) saving other people. He is obliged to continually grow and learn throughout his 'lives' (tutaj l. poj).