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Dear Mum and Dad,

I'm verry happy, because my holidays are great. This camp is amazing. I have fun every day. My first impression wasn't very good, because I got the worse room. Now it's OK - I managed to change my room. The location of a hotel is also wonderful - it's in the forest, there are a lot of trees. My room is very cosy, but quite big. There is a big window with curtains, two beds and a TV. I stay there with Ania and Magda - my new friends. I've met them at the airport. But, unfortunately, I forgot to take an umbrella and a swimsuit. It will be great if you could send me these things. And of course, if you can, please send me some money, because I'm running out of them.

Thanks a lot!
I love you,
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/Proszę o sprawdzenie :)))))/

Na początek,
because I got the worse room. worse than what?
please send me some money, because I'm running out of them.

czyli np. one of the worse rooms in the hotel?

To moze napisz ... dali mi pokój ktory /w którym/ byl np. brudny, zimny, nie miał dobrego widoku z okna lub co innego konkretniejszego niż gorszy, imo;) sugestia tylko;)

ok, dzięki - napisałam tak - My first impression wasn't very good, because I got not a very good room- it was cold and a bit dirty inside.

aha, a jak reszta, tzn czasy / articles i takie tam? :)

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