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Coraz mniej osób korzysta z prasy papierowej na rzecz portali internetowych. Napisz rozprawkę na temat wad i zalet elektronicznych wydań gazet i magazynów kolorowych.

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The history of media is long and full of inventions that totally changed normal people's life. In the past the only form of contact with the world was the press. Then scientists found radio and television. Nowadays we can also gather informations by browsing the internet. Currently websites are getting more and more popular. But are they really as wonderful as they seem to be?

The main benefit of internet portals is the fact that in most cases they are free. You do not need to pay anything for access to articles, they contain. Moreover, websites are the most convenient form of getting news. By using search engines you can fast and easily find text that you want to read and omit uninteresting content. Neither press nor television does not deliver this comfort. Finally, internet portals have unique feature, which is a possibility to share your opinion after reading an article. You may leave a comment or begin a discussion on forum.

On the other hand you have to remember about plenty of dangers, when surfing internet. Data you download can be infected by a virus, which - if you are not careful - can move to your device. In addition, it is typical for internet portals to be filled with annoying advertisements. Visiting such a portal can be irritating. Last but not least, web portals are not available to everyone. First of all, you have to equip in device, that is capable for connect with internet.

In conclusion, internet portals have as many benefits as drawbacks. In my opinion, decision between using them and reading newspapers or magazines depends on personal preferences.
The history of media is long and full of inventions that totally changed normal people's 'life' (wg mnie, jak mowisz o 'people' tzn wiecej jak jednej osobie, to slowo 'life' tez musi byc w l. mn) .
Then scientists 'found' (ja bym dala 'invented', bo to nie bylo gdzies 'zgubione'.) radio and television. Nowadays we can also gather 'informations' (no, dlaczego tak napisales? sprawdz jak to slowo sie pisze) by browsing the internet.

You do not need to pay anything for access to articles(,) (nie rozumiem dlaczego dales to 'przecinek') they contain.
By using search engines you can 'fast' (zle slowo, tutaj 'jak? quickly) and easily find (brak przedimka) text that you want to read and omit (mozna dodac 'any') uninteresting content. Neither press nor television 'does not' (niepotr) deliver this comfort. Finally, internet portals have ( brak przedimka) unique feature, which is a possibility to share your opinion after reading an article. You may leave a comment or begin a discussion on (brak przedimka) forum.

On the other hand you have to remember about 'plenty' (nie, to slowo tutaj nie pasuje, lepiej...the amount) of dangers, when surfing (brak przedimka) internet. (przedimek) data you download can be infected by a virus, which - if you are not careful - can move to your device.
First of all, you have to 'equip in' (cos tu nie tsak, nie za bardzo rozumiem) device, that is capable for connectION with (brak przedimka) internet.

In my opinion, (brak przedimka) decision between using them and reading newspapers or magazines depends on personal preferences.

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