Pocztówka-proszę o sprawdzenie i ewentualne poprawki. :)

Treść zadania.
Read the tip and do the writing task below.
You are on a beach holiday with your family. Write a postcard to an English friend.
- Say where you are, what the weather is like and weather you are enjoying yourself.
- Say what you did yesterday.
- Say what your plans are for tommorow.
- Say when you are coming home.

Moja pocztówka.

Dear Amy,
I'm having a great time on a beach in Greece with my family. It's awesome feeling that I finally arrived here. It's like a dream place!
Weather is sunny. I love it.

Yesterday we were at the beach. We played volleyball.

Tomorrow, we're going on a boat trip and then visiting a huge water park.
We are coming home next friday.
See you at school.
Lots of love,
Ewa

tutaj mam jeszcze taki pomysł...
Dear Amy,
I'm having a great time on a beach in Greece with my family. It's awesome feeling that I finally arrived here. It's like a dream place! Weather is amanzig.
Sun is shining every day and temperature is very high. I love it.

Yesterday we were at the beach. And also I was with my parents were in amusement park. There were a lot of attraction. Big slides, roundabouts and ferris wheel.

Tomorrow, we're going on a boat trip and then going to cinema.
We are coming home next friday.
See you at school.
Lots of love,
Ewa

napisałaś a dream place, to czemu nie wstawilaś przedimka przy awesome feeling, weather, sun i temperature

Wydaje mi sie że poprawiłam.
Teraz już jest w porzadku??

Dear Amy,
I'm having a great time on a beach in Greece with my family. It's a awesome feeling that I finally arrived here. It's like a dream place! The weather is amanzig.
The sun is shining every day and a temperature is very high. I love it.

Yesterday we were at the beach. And also I was with my parents were in amusement park. There were a lot of attraction. Big slides, roundabouts and ferris wheel.

Tomorrow, we're going on a boat trip and then going to cinema.
We are coming home next friday.
See you at school.
Lots of love,
Ewa

It's a awesome feeling
amanzig
We are coming home next friday. /sprawdź jaka jest zasada używania czasownika come i capitalisation/