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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in this month issue of ,,Jobs International". I would like apply for the position of bar and restaurant staff.

I am 23 years old. I have just finished gastronomy school and I will be starting course with top chef in my country- Poland. My native language is polish but i can also speak english very well. Actually I to attend course FCE certificate.

I would like to work for you, becouse I like working in the team and I have experience in gastronomy. I have two years experience ( czym zastąpić to drugie experience by nie było takich powtórek) of working in the kitchen and as waitress too. I have a good knowledge of cooking and consumer servicing. I really like this kind of job. I worked in cheap bar and exlusive restaurant both. I am very disciplined and energy person. I would enjoy the experience of working abroad.

I think I have the necessary knowledge and personality for this job. I enclose a reference from my previous employer.

I am available for interview at any time.

I look forward to hearing from you soon

Yours faithfully,
XYZ
Ne wierzę, że tutaj nie ma błędów ;)
Cytat: Vivee
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in this month issue of ,,Jobs International". I would like BRAK apply for the position of bar and restaurant staff/ATTENDANT. NA STANOWISKO PERSONELU?

I am 23 years old TU NAPISZ O POLSCE. I have just GRADUATED FROM A CATERING school and I will be starting PRZEDIMEK course with PRZEDIMEK top chef in my country- Poland. My native language is ORTOG->polish but i can also speak ORTOG->english very well. Actually I to attend TO CHYBA Z TRANSLATORA course FCE certificate.

I would like to work for you, becouse<-ORTOG I like working in A team and I have experience in THE CATERING INDUSTRY 'GASTRONOMY' TO LITERACKIE SLOWO. I have two years experience ( czym zastąpić to drugie experience by nie było takich powtórek DWA LATA PRACOWALAM W KUCHNI...) of working in the kitchen and as PRZEDIMEK waitress too. I have a good knowledge of cooking and consumer servicing<-W BIURZE OBSLUGI KLIENTA?. I really like this kind of job. I PRESENT PERFECT worked in PRZEDIMEK cheap bar and PRZEDIMEK ORTOG->exlusive restaurant W ZLYM MIEJSCU->both. I am PRZEDIMEK very disciplined and energy=ENERGIA person. I would enjoy the experience of working abroad.

I think I have the necessary knowledge and personality for this job. I enclose a reference from my previous employer.

I am available for PRZEDIMEK interview at any time.

I look forward to hearing from you soon

Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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