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When I got the door, suddenly I realised that something was wrong. Opposit me was standing coffin. I was so scared that I couldn't move. When I regained consciousness I watch the street looking somebody who could had live the coffin in front of my door, but no one was,=. I decided to open the chest. With a beating heart I raised the lid. There was card with message 'It is for you'. I couldn't believed in that, because I hadn't enemys. I fast run call to the police. When I put off the phone I hear approaching footsteps. I turned around and saw man. His face seem me familiar. I remembered that he is father the boy who I hit at a pedestrian crossing accidentally. It wasn't my fault. I knew that the boy is weelchair-bound now. Suddenly I felt a surge of energy. I knew that must fight with him. I grabbed the first thing that was under my hand. The man took a knife in his hand. When he approached me within 2 steps I uplifted my weapon and hit the man in the head. I didn't know that I have so much strength. The man fell and he lost counsciousness. In a moment arrived the police. They arrested the man. Later it turned out that the man was mentally ill man. For some time I was under the care of a psychologist, but it was all about me. It was one of the worst days of my life. I have never been so scared..

When I got (cos brak) the door, suddenly I realised that something was wrong. 'Opposit' (ortog) me was standing (cos brak) coffin.
When I regained consciousness I 'watch' (tutaj czas przeszly, no i przeciez masz 'regained' co jest czasem przeszlym) the street looking (cos brak) somebody who could had 'live' (calkowicie zle slowo) the coffin in front of my door, but no one was (tutaj brakuje THERE),=.
There was (s bak) card with (cos brak) message 'It is for you'. I couldn't believed in that, because I 'hadn't' (tutaj sie pogubiles, lepiej napisac w calosci...did not have any) 'enemys' (ortog). I (tutaj brakuje slowa 'quickly) 'fast' (zle slowo) 'run' (zly czas) call to the police. When I put 'off' (zle slowo) the phone I 'hear' (zly czas) approaching footsteps. I turned around and saw (cos brak) man. His face 'seem me familiar' (zla kolejnosc slow...seemed familiar to me). I remembered that he 'is' WAS (cos brak) father (cos brak) the boy whoM I hit at a pedestrian crossing accidentally.
I knew that (kto? co?) must fight with him. I grabbed the first thing that was 'under' (nie, napisz 'near to) my hand.
When he approached me within 2 steps I 'uplifted' (zle, tutaj lifted up) my weapon and hit the man in the head. I didn't know that I 'have' (daj HAD) so much strength.
In a moment 'arrived' (daj to na koncu zdania) the police.
Later it turned out that the man was mentally ill. 'man' (niepotr).

When I got the door... = (w tym przypadku) Kiedy otworzylem drzwi...
When I got to the door... - Kiedy dotarlem do drzwi...

aha...when I got the door - kiedy otworzylem, - ale przeciez to jest bardzo kolokwalnie, lepiej...when I opened the door...

fakt, bardzo potoczne uzycie

. zmien szyk końcówki;)

Polecenie brzmiało 'Napisz opowadanie rozpoczynające się od słów: 'When I got to the door, suddenly I realised that something was wrong'', niechcący ominęłam po prostu 'to'.. :) Dziękuję!