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Witam,

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Dear Sir/Madam

With reference to your advertisement the Daily Mail on 24th May 2014, I am writing to ask for further information about the learning to play tennis.

Firstly, I would like to know a Little more about the membership of the course. For instance, could you please tell me how much membership of this course costs and how many hours daily tennis lesson takes?

Furthermore, I would be grateful for Any further details concerning accommodation. For example, could you tell me whether you offer any single rooms? I would like to take part in this course with my girlfried and I wu old like to share a room with her.

Finally, I would appreciate it if you could send me complete information about coaching. I would like to ask what the level of training for beginners is?

Thank you In advance. I look forward to hearing form you again.

Yours faithfully,
XYZ


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Pozdrawiam i dziękuje :)

With reference to your advertisement IN the Daily Mail on 24th May 2014, I am writing to ask for further information about 'the' (niepotr) learning to play tennis.

Firstly, I would like to know a Little more about the 'membership of the course' (lepiej napisz 'course membership). For instance, could you please tell me how much membership of this course costs and how many hours daily DOES THE tennis lesson 'takes' TAKE?

I would like to take part in this course with my girlfried and I 'wu old' (would) like to share a room with her.

Finally, I would appreciate 'it' (niepotrt) if you could send me complete information about coaching. I would like to ask what IS the level of training for beginners 'is' (staraj sie nie pisac czasownika na koncu, to nie lacina)?

Dziękuje Terri, rozumiem, że w tym ostatnim zdaniu nie robię indirect'a?

"Finally, I would appreciate 'it' (niepotrt) if you could send me complete information about coaching. I would like to ask what IS the level of training for beginners 'is' (staraj sie nie pisac czasownika na koncu, to nie lacina)? "